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CSP: A Collection of Poems

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A collection of poetry

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Comment from Domino
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Hi, Sue.
I hope my last review didn't inspire this. LOL!
Lovely pic and colour choice. Excellent vocabulary used to create strong images. Excellent. Best wishes, Ray xx

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Yes Ray, this is ALL your fault! HA! Actually, I'm on top of the world today - (just drawing off past experience)- Ha! Thanks for your review and glad you liked! Regards, Sue
Comment from Word Weaver
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Pose threat to a new light
Raise doubt within my sight

This is a great acrostic! I like how the above lines rhyme and flow smoothly. Thanks for sharing it and good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Hi Word Weaver, thank you very much reading..so glad you like it! And thanks for your review. Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Artasylum
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depression is insidious and hard to fight but you can with help and you can win out...i feel sad when i read this...yours, diana

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Diana, thankfully we can articulate our feelings with words. They, themselves, can help heal and repair. (As poetry has done for me!!) Thank you for your very kind review. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Janilou
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Terrific metaphors here.IT can feel very much like we are trapped in darkness when depression strikes. There is always a brighter day ahead, if we can just reach out to it.
Very good poetry.
Well done. No errors noted.

Jani

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Jani, thank you for your specific comments. I'm glad you like the metaphors. And thank you for your very kind review. With regards, Sue
Comment from artsygal
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I really could relate to what you've written in this lovely but sad acrostic. It is so easy to get caught in webs of one's own design. I think that's why the art goes so well with the poem's contents!
I think your accompanying lines describe the chosen word extremely well.
HUGS
Sara

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Sara, so glad you read my poem and thank you for your very nice review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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This is a good piece of free verse,
cleverly thought out, with a smooth
flow to the words presented as an
Acrostic poem - an ideal entry for
the contest.


Good luck,
Margaret.

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2008
    Margaret, thank you for reading; and for your kind wishes. And I thank you for your specific comments! Regards, Sue