My Undying Devotion!
Praising God for The Gift of Her!61 total reviews
Comment from Fred Berg
The use of commas splices this up a bit for me and I found myself backtracking to find the thought again. I think it's great that you are writing poems for your girlfriend, and afterall the only one that needs to be pleased by them is her :)
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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The use of commas splices this up a bit for me and I found myself backtracking to find the thought again. I think it's great that you are writing poems for your girlfriend, and afterall the only one that needs to be pleased by them is her :)
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!