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LIJ Red
This was an ambitious undertaking, but you held to the form, and created images an atmosphere appropriate to the work. I am impressed, but a wee bit over my head as far as critiquing this. Fivers.
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Comment Written 18-May-2018
reply by the author on 18-May-2018
Thanks, Red. I appreciate your taking the time to read through this epic form. Apart from France Preseren, I have not been able to find any other poets that have attempted it. Understandably perhaps!