Comment from MelB

Excellent

I thought I've felt complete isolation before, but I don't think it will be anything compared to what those in hell will feel. Beautiful picture and an uplifting ending in hope.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks so much Melissa, for the great review

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great description of a fear that seems to be in the spiritual realm. It sounds like the "shadow's" work to cause us to doubt God's nearness. Comforting end revealing the hope of the new day.

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2016

Thanks for the great review and comments,