Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)
A poem, just for the hell of it...127 total reviews
Comment from vapros
Another top grade for you, Dean, for this impressive production number. I thought for a while that guy might have you, but you kept pushing him off. But hang loose, he is never far away. Great rhyme and rhythm. I'm compressed.
Bill
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Another top grade for you, Dean, for this impressive production number. I thought for a while that guy might have you, but you kept pushing him off. But hang loose, he is never far away. Great rhyme and rhythm. I'm compressed.
Bill
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from marijmd
Is that what rain sound like? We never get ANY here! LOL
Very cool ambiance to accent your poem
Love all the little videos too - such cool footage you uncovered!
I would not dare worship that "other king" with such a spooky threat!
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Is that what rain sound like? We never get ANY here! LOL
Very cool ambiance to accent your poem
Love all the little videos too - such cool footage you uncovered!
I would not dare worship that "other king" with such a spooky threat!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Trybuck
As long as Faith lives
Hope will survive
and in the end
Love wins
For Love is a person
His name is Jesus
King of kings, Lord of lords
The only one worthy to be adored
Well done, Buck
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As long as Faith lives
Hope will survive
and in the end
Love wins
For Love is a person
His name is Jesus
King of kings, Lord of lords
The only one worthy to be adored
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from tdragonfly
The devil is always ready to pounce upon the individual and or time. When you are at a weak point the devil will offer you the world. So always be aware of the deals that you make and with whom.
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The devil is always ready to pounce upon the individual and or time. When you are at a weak point the devil will offer you the world. So always be aware of the deals that you make and with whom.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from chryssy
This is a very descriptive poem. It really shows the difference of how we think we know others and ourselves and how we really don't. I think it sends a promising message in it's lyrical words. Good job.
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This is a very descriptive poem. It really shows the difference of how we think we know others and ourselves and how we really don't. I think it sends a promising message in it's lyrical words. Good job.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
No no no your medicine is just fine. It earns a well deserved six for flow, rhyme, meter, descriptions, total emotion and the ability to hold my wavering attention through it all. Great piece.
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No no no your medicine is just fine. It earns a well deserved six for flow, rhyme, meter, descriptions, total emotion and the ability to hold my wavering attention through it all. Great piece.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
This is perhaps a little more serious than the humorous title would suggest. You cover the eternal battle between good and evil and the fight for the souls of mankind.
The verse is well constructed, even the difficult all dialogue section - rhyme and meter never falter and there is a powerful message in the narrator's rejection of sin.
Steve
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This is perhaps a little more serious than the humorous title would suggest. You cover the eternal battle between good and evil and the fight for the souls of mankind.
The verse is well constructed, even the difficult all dialogue section - rhyme and meter never falter and there is a powerful message in the narrator's rejection of sin.
Steve
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Irish Rain
Yes..new medication might be good, ha ha! I love your weirdly scary frightmare...and the pictures! AND...it has the name I wanted...Rainy Days...I was Justjo...tried to change my name to Rainy Days...but it was taken, so settled (quite happily) for Irish Rain. I love your uplifting assertion at the poems end.
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Yes..new medication might be good, ha ha! I love your weirdly scary frightmare...and the pictures! AND...it has the name I wanted...Rainy Days...I was Justjo...tried to change my name to Rainy Days...but it was taken, so settled (quite happily) for Irish Rain. I love your uplifting assertion at the poems end.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from country ranch writer
Oh dear what a night mare that was, holy cow!maybe he should change your med's or hide the hooch. neither one sounds good for you
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Oh dear what a night mare that was, holy cow!maybe he should change your med's or hide the hooch. neither one sounds good for you
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Dr. Nad
May I confess something to you? Often when I read a poem I think one of three things. 1. I could write that Poem better than they did. - or - 2. I could write that poem as well as they did. - or - 3. I know some things I'd change. I sure didn't say any of those things today about "Reign Knee Daze"
You employed incredible command of the English language, exquisite use of cadenced flow and you dazzled your devotees with a Syncopated visual, verbal and virtual delight.
Thanks for SHARING Biblical TRUTH! God Bless You!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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May I confess something to you? Often when I read a poem I think one of three things. 1. I could write that Poem better than they did. - or - 2. I could write that poem as well as they did. - or - 3. I know some things I'd change. I sure didn't say any of those things today about "Reign Knee Daze"
You employed incredible command of the English language, exquisite use of cadenced flow and you dazzled your devotees with a Syncopated visual, verbal and virtual delight.
Thanks for SHARING Biblical TRUTH! God Bless You!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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I'm so happy you saw the spiritual message of this poem, as one young man rejects sins of the world and the temptations of Satan, the enemy, Dr. Nad. Many either haven't noticed it otr they've simply neglected to metion it.
But not you, sir, for you have nailed my reasons for writing this as I did like an expert carpenter from Nazareth would construct something out of wood with a hammer and chisel.
For that, and your brilliant assessment, I am eternally grateful to you.
