Jerry Jing-Jang's Halloween
JJJ ain't afraid of no ghost64 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Smooth flowing picture of words about rustler ghosts, cowboys, Rusty rustler,and Jerry Jing-Jang riding off at day break. Halloween on the trail, with my dust covered butt and boots hiding behind the livery. Great Job!
Thanks, for the read!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Smooth flowing picture of words about rustler ghosts, cowboys, Rusty rustler,and Jerry Jing-Jang riding off at day break. Halloween on the trail, with my dust covered butt and boots hiding behind the livery. Great Job!
Thanks, for the read!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks for a wonderful and very funny review.
Comment from denhagan
This was a nice fun poem to read, written in the quatrain style with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture to accompany the poem.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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This was a nice fun poem to read, written in the quatrain style with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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I'm glad you had fun with my poem. Thanks for the great review.
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You're welcome Cindy,
Dennis
Comment from ravenblack
Good use of rhythm and rhyme in your cattle-rustlin' tale of ghosts. Only problem I had with it is that it really did not have much of a Halloween feel, more of a western.
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Good use of rhythm and rhyme in your cattle-rustlin' tale of ghosts. Only problem I had with it is that it really did not have much of a Halloween feel, more of a western.
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Thanks. Maybe it's something new, a Halloween western.
Comment from 9999pool
Another great JJJ story and Roundup becomes the hero this time around. Rusty got what he deserved and the ghosts had been kind to him. He had learnt a good lesson indeed never to cross JJJ and roundup's paths again and I am darn sure he won't anymore.
great story told in a hilarious fashion and all the rhyming and words used were very original and spoke the cowboy's tongue in a precise manner.
Great write and well done. Lot of good luck for the contest. This has a chance to win based on the word weave lines and rhyming.
Cherio, Ritchie. :))
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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Another great JJJ story and Roundup becomes the hero this time around. Rusty got what he deserved and the ghosts had been kind to him. He had learnt a good lesson indeed never to cross JJJ and roundup's paths again and I am darn sure he won't anymore.
great story told in a hilarious fashion and all the rhyming and words used were very original and spoke the cowboy's tongue in a precise manner.
Great write and well done. Lot of good luck for the contest. This has a chance to win based on the word weave lines and rhyming.
Cherio, Ritchie. :))
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed JJJ's latest adventure. Thanks for the stars and the good wishes for the contest.
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Welcome.
JJJ and randy will make it big time one day , I am sure as their stories of the wild wild west are so entertaining and breezy to read. Even older children will like them as Randy is around to amuse them, smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))