Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
It's a good chapter. It keeps the juices flowing and like Sara, I want Cassie back safe.
"I'm thirty-two and that's nine years younger than you, could I be that women?" [woman]
How's it going? Blessings and love - FIesty
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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It's a good chapter. It keeps the juices flowing and like Sara, I want Cassie back safe.
"I'm thirty-two and that's nine years younger than you, could I be that women?" [woman]
How's it going? Blessings and love - FIesty
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your review and encouraging words.
Comment from sizemore0409
This is the first chapter of this work which I stumbled across, and thus the first I have read. I think I can safely assume that previous chapters have already fixed firmly in the minds of the readers the setting and the characters --- their personalities, their circumstances, their emotional makeup, their quirks and unique ways of interacting with one another. Assuming all that, the dialogue and movement and interactions all flow well within this chapter; make for intriguing reading and impel the reader to keep turning the pages. Keep it up!
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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This is the first chapter of this work which I stumbled across, and thus the first I have read. I think I can safely assume that previous chapters have already fixed firmly in the minds of the readers the setting and the characters --- their personalities, their circumstances, their emotional makeup, their quirks and unique ways of interacting with one another. Assuming all that, the dialogue and movement and interactions all flow well within this chapter; make for intriguing reading and impel the reader to keep turning the pages. Keep it up!
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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I am confuses at to why you gave me four stars. You have made not suggestions to make improvements so I don't understand how to improve to receive 5 stars from you.
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I'm sorry --- I am brand new to FanStory; and I might be being too stingy when I am giving out 'stars'. I thought your work was good, and I'm glad I read it, so I gave it 4 stars --- isn't 4 stars GOOD? I may have to reassess my understanding of the rating system, as it is utilized within the FanStory community.
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Normally when people receive 4 stars, the reviewer suggests way to make it to 5 stars and often if they make the changes the reviewer will go back and up it to 5 stars. I have no idea what I did wrong or any way to improve my writting. I am here to learn like everybody else. I would like suggestions.
Comment from Lekatt
The excitement is building and I am enjoying it. This is very good writing and the suspense is intense. I like this kind of book very much.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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The excitement is building and I am enjoying it. This is very good writing and the suspense is intense. I like this kind of book very much.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thank you very much for your kind review and praise.
Comment from c_lucas
You did an excellent job with your characters. I like the way you are slowly bringing Joe and Sara back together. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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You did an excellent job with your characters. I like the way you are slowly bringing Joe and Sara back together. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome. Barbara. Charlie