Tantalizing Eyes
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Comment from Mariea
Good morning Barbara. Another good chapter and still consistent with the story line. Story contents moving along at a good pace. No 'spags' that were apparent.
Have a great day. Regards Mia
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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Good morning Barbara. Another good chapter and still consistent with the story line. Story contents moving along at a good pace. No 'spags' that were apparent.
Have a great day. Regards Mia
Comment Written 13-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.
Comment from adewpearl
She leaned around Ralph, hoping to get a glimpse - add comma
walked toward her. Leya released - I added a period
she more than over came it - overcame
I love all the guys drooling over Leya in her conservative one piece bathing suit - heaven help them if she wears a string bikini. LOL Boy, all the fantasizing going on in this place :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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She leaned around Ralph, hoping to get a glimpse - add comma
walked toward her. Leya released - I added a period
she more than over came it - overcame
I love all the guys drooling over Leya in her conservative one piece bathing suit - heaven help them if she wears a string bikini. LOL Boy, all the fantasizing going on in this place :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2010
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2010
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Thank you for catching my errors. I am on them. Her heart only belongs to one of those men. Thank you for your continued support.
