CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from c_lucas
Seize the day! This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Seize the day! This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Adri7enne
You go, girl! What a great attitude for facing life. It's always a struggle, but it does have its moments of glory. Good rhymes. A very interesting artwork, too. Lovely work!
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You go, girl! What a great attitude for facing life. It's always a struggle, but it does have its moments of glory. Good rhymes. A very interesting artwork, too. Lovely work!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from joan marie
I like the message here. We only live once make the best of it. Well penned and great advice to all of us. Morale surely can make the difference if we fail or succeed in life. joan marie
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I like the message here. We only live once make the best of it. Well penned and great advice to all of us. Morale surely can make the difference if we fail or succeed in life. joan marie
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Roisin
Welcome back Sue. It was a lovely surprise to see a posting from you today. I've missed you. I love this poem. It's so heartfelt and full of emotion. I especially love the second stanza:
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
It feels sad and yet full of hope. I love the rhyme scheme too.
I havn't been here much either over the last few weeks. I'll PM you later and maybe we can catch up.
Hugs
Roisin x
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Welcome back Sue. It was a lovely surprise to see a posting from you today. I've missed you. I love this poem. It's so heartfelt and full of emotion. I especially love the second stanza:
No cease in hope--no lying down
As victory in bleakness is nigh
When in the depths
I'll always rise
For I have my own battle cry
It feels sad and yet full of hope. I love the rhyme scheme too.
I havn't been here much either over the last few weeks. I'll PM you later and maybe we can catch up.
Hugs
Roisin x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Joyce L.
I guess for each of us, our battle cry can be a different thing. I was delighted that you had such a posititve look on the way you would be affected and hold your head high. Nice job with the poem.
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I guess for each of us, our battle cry can be a different thing. I was delighted that you had such a posititve look on the way you would be affected and hold your head high. Nice job with the poem.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from honeytree
We live our lives and enjoy our lives.If one becomes unwell we become better again. No one knows when they will die so we might a well enjoy life and help others on the way. I enjoyed reading your words here and the art work is really great.
Honeytree.
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We live our lives and enjoy our lives.If one becomes unwell we become better again. No one knows when they will die so we might a well enjoy life and help others on the way. I enjoyed reading your words here and the art work is really great.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from RADIO
Excellent lines throughout this
strong poem of hope and faith.
I love the battle cry, "Espirit
de corp." and the no cease in hope,
no lying down. Wonderful poem and
I enjoyed it very much.
Radio
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Excellent lines throughout this
strong poem of hope and faith.
I love the battle cry, "Espirit
de corp." and the no cease in hope,
no lying down. Wonderful poem and
I enjoyed it very much.
Radio
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from jwryt
very encouraging poem..it clearly states a person's will to fight and not lose hope..really nice..thanks for sharing this one..
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very encouraging poem..it clearly states a person's will to fight and not lose hope..really nice..thanks for sharing this one..
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Hey woman!
I ain't seen you since I don't know when and I am happy to see that you're still charging the gates of hell with a bucket of ice water! Good post and even better to see you!
Love,
Pen
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Hey woman!
I ain't seen you since I don't know when and I am happy to see that you're still charging the gates of hell with a bucket of ice water! Good post and even better to see you!
Love,
Pen
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
Comment from BellaSpirit
Sixteezkid,
Your poem is strong in message and very well presented. I like the format and your rhyme and rhythm are excellent. My favorite verse is the last. It really added a lot of strength.
BellaSpirit
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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Sixteezkid,
Your poem is strong in message and very well presented. I like the format and your rhyme and rhythm are excellent. My favorite verse is the last. It really added a lot of strength.
BellaSpirit
Comment Written 07-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2009
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BellaSpirit, thank you for your very kind comments and great review. Very much appreciated. Sue :-)