CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Brandenpaul
Always amazed at how just a few words weaved together just right can say something so profound and powerful. Hope is a bridge-to better days after a loss. Great write and good luck with this entry.
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Always amazed at how just a few words weaved together just right can say something so profound and powerful. Hope is a bridge-to better days after a loss. Great write and good luck with this entry.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from RADIO
Great way to put this and I
totally agree with it. When life
seems bleak and gray for what ever
reason, the bridge of hope is always
there to cross. It is our choice.
Radio
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Great way to put this and I
totally agree with it. When life
seems bleak and gray for what ever
reason, the bridge of hope is always
there to cross. It is our choice.
Radio
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from prodigal
Both lines are six syllables long and you have good internal and ending rhyming. I like that the message is about hope. Very well done- Good luck in the contest. - Sam
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Both lines are six syllables long and you have good internal and ending rhyming. I like that the message is about hope. Very well done- Good luck in the contest. - Sam
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, another excellent contest entry and a terrific story, my friend. I understood the meaning behind it and you did a great job with it. Good luck in the contest.
Reggie
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Sue, another excellent contest entry and a terrific story, my friend. I understood the meaning behind it and you did a great job with it. Good luck in the contest.
Reggie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Summer Falls
Wow Sue! This is a fantastic two liner! Okay that isn't very technical is it? lol.
The truth shines through in those few words. Hope is what carries us through. Good luck in the contest!
Summer
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Wow Sue! This is a fantastic two liner! Okay that isn't very technical is it? lol.
The truth shines through in those few words. Hope is what carries us through. Good luck in the contest!
Summer
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from bard owl
Your essence poem is very thought-provoking. Hope IS the bridge after a terrible loss. This whole contest caused me to really have to concentrate. It is much easier to write longer verse than these terse, ususally sage, two liners. Execellent entry. Best of luck and blessings, too. Linda
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Your essence poem is very thought-provoking. Hope IS the bridge after a terrible loss. This whole contest caused me to really have to concentrate. It is much easier to write longer verse than these terse, ususally sage, two liners. Execellent entry. Best of luck and blessings, too. Linda
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I don't think i have ever seen a poem made up of just two lines. This one really reads and sounds well. It also makes a lot of sense. Well done.
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I don't think i have ever seen a poem made up of just two lines. This one really reads and sounds well. It also makes a lot of sense. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from jeslaf
Sue, this is optimistic, and a good attitude to have and recommend if one is to survive this life well, and for long. You must be a modern art fan (or all types, for that matter)--your work always has such attention to detail, such wonderful artwork. :)
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Sue, this is optimistic, and a good attitude to have and recommend if one is to survive this life well, and for long. You must be a modern art fan (or all types, for that matter)--your work always has such attention to detail, such wonderful artwork. :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Domino
Another very thoughtful write, Sue.
Somehow the bridge metaphor implies out of adversity comes resultant hope, where the tragedy has perhaps brought people together in their grief.
Good luck n love, Ray xx
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Another very thoughtful write, Sue.
Somehow the bridge metaphor implies out of adversity comes resultant hope, where the tragedy has perhaps brought people together in their grief.
Good luck n love, Ray xx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009
Comment from Roisin
Hi Sue. You've used beautiful, well structured words in this essence poem. I love what you're saying. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
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Hi Sue. You've used beautiful, well structured words in this essence poem. I love what you're saying. Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 16-Mar-2009