CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Break This Heart"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Cedar
Beautiful love poem that has a wonderful even flow that makes it so easy to read. I do enjoy reading your work, you have a great talent.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Beautiful love poem that has a wonderful even flow that makes it so easy to read. I do enjoy reading your work, you have a great talent.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Cedar, your comments and compliments mean more than you know. Thank you so much for your great review. With warm regards, Sue
Comment from jeslaf
Been there, coming back a bit from it now, but still, that's more where I live. Feeling's such a bitch most of the time, but without it you miss those golden moments, too. Here's to cracking that shell, poet! Good write. :)
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Been there, coming back a bit from it now, but still, that's more where I live. Feeling's such a bitch most of the time, but without it you miss those golden moments, too. Here's to cracking that shell, poet! Good write. :)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Yes, there were times when I didn't want to feel. As they say, 'be careful what you wish for'. A numbness to feeling is not what we want or need. The biggest compliment of all is to hear you call me a poet. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from Poetic Friend
Sue, I think this is one of your best of your best. That last stanza is hard hitting and would resonate with me for a while.
How many people would make such a request? Well, it goes back to the popular saying: "It's better to have love and loss, than to never have loved at all."
Great job, Sue.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Sue, I think this is one of your best of your best. That last stanza is hard hitting and would resonate with me for a while.
How many people would make such a request? Well, it goes back to the popular saying: "It's better to have love and loss, than to never have loved at all."
Great job, Sue.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Poetic Friend, "best of my best" is an awesome compliment! The words just came out as I "felt" this very deeply. Thank you so much for your great review. Thank you for saying it resonated with you. With warm regards, Sue
Comment from Diny
Growing cold from loneliness - THis is the second poem dealing with loneilness I have read today- I wrote something after reading it but instead of calling it loneliness I titled it missing you-
I love your grace and meter the flow was magical and tight structure and sentiments that soared!-
the haunting phrases like this...
Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel -WOW what a poet!
Write on-Diny
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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Growing cold from loneliness - THis is the second poem dealing with loneilness I have read today- I wrote something after reading it but instead of calling it loneliness I titled it missing you-
I love your grace and meter the flow was magical and tight structure and sentiments that soared!-
the haunting phrases like this...
Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel -WOW what a poet!
Write on-Diny
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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Diny, so loneliness is contagious on FS today... ha!! Thanks very much for all your comments and compliments on this piece. And for your very kind review. Sue
Comment from adewpearl
Sue, Another most philosophical piece - to prefer feeling sorrow or a broken heart or pain over feeling nothing at all - that is one provocative thought - strong rhyming quatrains with a high-impact message. Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Sue, Another most philosophical piece - to prefer feeling sorrow or a broken heart or pain over feeling nothing at all - that is one provocative thought - strong rhyming quatrains with a high-impact message. Brooke
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Brooke, yeah, what's up with my philosophical streak?! Ha! "Provocative thought" is such a great compliment! Thanks so much for your review. As always, Sue
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I don't know - my son got his college degree in philosophy and even he isn't as philosophical as you've been lately LOL
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Don't scare me. If I go any deeper in thought, I may not come back! LOL!!!
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi sixteezkid,
This very emotional piece could have more than one meaning. With perfect rhyme and rhythm it flows beautifully. It is an excellent write. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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Hi sixteezkid,
This very emotional piece could have more than one meaning. With perfect rhyme and rhythm it flows beautifully. It is an excellent write. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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mtngal, Yes, it could have more than one meaning. Isn't poetry wonderful in that way?! Thank you so much for your great review and compliments. Sue :-))
Comment from amada
I like this piece even when it could mean different things to many persons. I thinks of it as a declaration of war with your innerself, trying to get away from the cocoon. r
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I like this piece even when it could mean different things to many persons. I thinks of it as a declaration of war with your innerself, trying to get away from the cocoon. r
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
Comment from NightWriter
"Break This Heart" is excellent. For this is one sure way to feel. Poem written with perfect rhythm and rhyming throughout. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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"Break This Heart" is excellent. For this is one sure way to feel. Poem written with perfect rhythm and rhyming throughout. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2009
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NightWriter, I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you so much for your comments and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from glacierbabe
Wow Sue, this is fantastic. To me, it was saying that life was insde a cocoon and the heart is yearning for someone to break the cocoon, even if it causes pain, so life will be free again. I don't know if that is what you were trying to say but that is what it said to me. Excellent writing. :)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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Wow Sue, this is fantastic. To me, it was saying that life was insde a cocoon and the heart is yearning for someone to break the cocoon, even if it causes pain, so life will be free again. I don't know if that is what you were trying to say but that is what it said to me. Excellent writing. :)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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glacierbabe, thanks for sharing what this piece said to you. And so glad you liked it. Thank you for your very kind review and compliments. WIth regards, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel
This is truly awesome writing friend.
Longing to feel alive by feeling the
pain of a broken heart, how sad is that? This is emotional
heartache of the worst kind. Awesome writing!
You alright friend?
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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Soften up this calloused soul
Before it turns to steel
Break my heart to let me know
There's something left to feel
This is truly awesome writing friend.
Longing to feel alive by feeling the
pain of a broken heart, how sad is that? This is emotional
heartache of the worst kind. Awesome writing!
You alright friend?
Comment Written 01-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2009
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Hey Hitcher, your compliments mean so much, my friend. And your very generous review. Sue :-))