CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Peace, Sweet Peace"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Valerie Julia Ann
A very wonderful choice of words - "the nectar so longed for" "To have a field of that bountiful/glorious taste waiting to be sipped" Such loveliness you've portrayed here. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
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A very wonderful choice of words - "the nectar so longed for" "To have a field of that bountiful/glorious taste waiting to be sipped" Such loveliness you've portrayed here. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
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Valerie, now that you've highlighted those words, I want some of that peace right now! Ha! So glad you did highlight the part that your enjoyed. I most certainly appreciate your most generous review and comments. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I find this piece cool and refreshing. The images employed paint vivid pictures of serenity and inward calm. I enjoyed the simple style and diction as well as the straightforward meaning in the lines. kudos
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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I find this piece cool and refreshing. The images employed paint vivid pictures of serenity and inward calm. I enjoyed the simple style and diction as well as the straightforward meaning in the lines. kudos
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Perp, I am so happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you very much for your most generous review and comments! Much appreciated and with regards, Sue
Comment from cmay44
Hi 6teezkid
Wonderful well-written poem with a beautiful theme. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this lovely work. No suggestions for improvement.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Hi 6teezkid
Wonderful well-written poem with a beautiful theme. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this lovely work. No suggestions for improvement.
God bless you
love from
Carolyn
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Carolyn, nice to see you again! Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement. And many thanks for your most generous review and comments. God Bless...Sue
Comment from SunlitWhisper
This was so peaceful. The words are very smooth as they flow from word to word. There are tranquil moments and I could fell the coolness of it's depths.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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This was so peaceful. The words are very smooth as they flow from word to word. There are tranquil moments and I could fell the coolness of it's depths.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Sunlit, so happy you enjoyed my poem. I most sincerely thank you for your generous review and comments. Much appreciated, Sue
Comment from Mike K2
I really liked this well written poem. In my life there have been times when peace is very fleeting as a personal war raged. But I have also had those peaceful moments and a refreshing change of pace. Farm roads work very well, as it gives easy access to the other sense that complete that peace, sight, sound and smell.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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I really liked this well written poem. In my life there have been times when peace is very fleeting as a personal war raged. But I have also had those peaceful moments and a refreshing change of pace. Farm roads work very well, as it gives easy access to the other sense that complete that peace, sight, sound and smell.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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So glad you commented on the image accompanying my poem. You are right...that it does touch the other senses! Thank you for verbalizing that. And thank you for such a lovely review and all your comments. They are all much appreciated. Most sincerely, Sue
Comment from Summer Falls
Your poem flowed smoothly and was a very easy read. The essence of wanting to enjoy and hold on to peace from every day stresses was apparent.
I love your style.--- Rest in the arms of a breeze ---my favorite line
summergirl
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Your poem flowed smoothly and was a very easy read. The essence of wanting to enjoy and hold on to peace from every day stresses was apparent.
I love your style.--- Rest in the arms of a breeze ---my favorite line
summergirl
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Summergirl, Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I most certainly appreciate your generous review and all comments. (Ok, it is my poem, but I will say that I also like that line very much! I "felt" it so much when I wrote it....there were no other words to describe my feeling that day). So much appreciated. Sincerely, Sue
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You are very welcome~ now go rest in a breeze. lol
summer
Comment from yachtworknz
Ya, lets hear it for peace. Cool deal.
I liked this bit especially-
Peace, sweet peace
Oh, to have a field of that bountiful,
Glorious taste waiting to be sipped,
To give the heart song;
Cheers
Scott
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
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Ya, lets hear it for peace. Cool deal.
I liked this bit especially-
Peace, sweet peace
Oh, to have a field of that bountiful,
Glorious taste waiting to be sipped,
To give the heart song;
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 18-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2008
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Scott....thank you so much for your generous review and comments! Am so glad you highlighted a part that you really liked!! Again, thanks much and regards.....Sue
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
excellent artwork to compliment this poem. there are times we need a that respite from the daily grind. yours seems much more needed with raising 6 children.
keep writing as your poetry is very insightful to read.................warmest regards,,,jim
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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excellent artwork to compliment this poem. there are times we need a that respite from the daily grind. yours seems much more needed with raising 6 children.
keep writing as your poetry is very insightful to read.................warmest regards,,,jim
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Jim, thank you for totally appreciating what it takes to raise 6 kids! Ha!!! Now that they are gone from home, I miss them so much being about the house. BUT, that peace does come a little easier. Thank you so much for your taking the time to read and comment on my poem and for your most generous review. Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from debskatz
Hi 6teezkid,
This actually quite beautiful. I'll be honest & say that I nearly didn't read it because I didn't particularly care for your other poem, which I didn't critique. But this one I like.
It flowed nicely & read beautifully. You described it well and I liked the feeling of it.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
smiles,
deb
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Hi 6teezkid,
This actually quite beautiful. I'll be honest & say that I nearly didn't read it because I didn't particularly care for your other poem, which I didn't critique. But this one I like.
It flowed nicely & read beautifully. You described it well and I liked the feeling of it.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
smiles,
deb
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Deb, thank you so much for your generous review and all of your comments. Very encouraging! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from giftid3
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. I enjoyed reading this and the imagery that came forth.
It is well worded and well expressed with a good flow and rythmn to it from beginning to end.
The imagery your words portrayed shows one able to find peace in the most simplest of ways, even amidst turmoil and chaos.
The serenity and tranquility experienced is enough to refresh, restore and renew while gently soothing the tired and worn soul. Sometimes the escape is in the mind where one ventures off to a far off land, and other times it is a quite but short walk to the letterbox or a walk around the garden just enjoying the simple beauty of nature and the environment.
Thank you for the journey your words took me on and many blessings to you
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. I enjoyed reading this and the imagery that came forth.
It is well worded and well expressed with a good flow and rythmn to it from beginning to end.
The imagery your words portrayed shows one able to find peace in the most simplest of ways, even amidst turmoil and chaos.
The serenity and tranquility experienced is enough to refresh, restore and renew while gently soothing the tired and worn soul. Sometimes the escape is in the mind where one ventures off to a far off land, and other times it is a quite but short walk to the letterbox or a walk around the garden just enjoying the simple beauty of nature and the environment.
Thank you for the journey your words took me on and many blessings to you
Comment Written 17-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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I am most humbled by all of your words. And very touched you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem and to review it so generously (and for your lovely comments). Words like that help create peace also! Most sincerely, Sue