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A Ballad67 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
A most beautiful sentiment and beautifully expressed too, Roy. I enjoyed every verse but my favorite would have to be this one:
Deep in the canyons of the mind
that screams for sweet release,
I can't contain that precious brew
a tide that cannot cease. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gifts. You have several. MM
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
A most beautiful sentiment and beautifully expressed too, Roy. I enjoyed every verse but my favorite would have to be this one:
Deep in the canyons of the mind
that screams for sweet release,
I can't contain that precious brew
a tide that cannot cease. Thanks for sharing your wonderful gifts. You have several. MM
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks Adonna, for these wonderful comments and a great review, and stellar stars, blessings Roy
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Hi Roy.
What's that line, whereby through the grace of God go I.
I believe its true.
Very nice expression here. I really like your line...
"Who stirs the scribal cauldron?" - very poetic.
Most of the poem is in 8-6 although the meter is a tad off in a few places. It doesn't matter though, the poems flows smoothly.
Thank you for your author's notes and as always, I enjoy your message.
Take care,
Katiemae Dead
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
Hi Roy.
What's that line, whereby through the grace of God go I.
I believe its true.
Very nice expression here. I really like your line...
"Who stirs the scribal cauldron?" - very poetic.
Most of the poem is in 8-6 although the meter is a tad off in a few places. It doesn't matter though, the poems flows smoothly.
Thank you for your author's notes and as always, I enjoy your message.
Take care,
Katiemae Dead
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks KatieMae, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A poet is one who is passionately in love with the language. They write about the feelings, about emotions and take you to a different world. They are true philosophers. Maybe they hear the whispers of the God, I loved the poem . Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
A poet is one who is passionately in love with the language. They write about the feelings, about emotions and take you to a different world. They are true philosophers. Maybe they hear the whispers of the God, I loved the poem . Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks Seshardri, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Senyai
Hi Roy,
Alas I have no sixes left. This is a 10 star rating if I could give that to you, I would gladly bestow. Your poem goes to the heart of a poet that cries for a sweet release to spill upon the page, the well overflowing that cannot be contained. The Good News must be told. You describe the process intimately...
So lovely, Roy! Says so much in each stanza... each line is a jewel and each stanza a gem because the words that flow are tempered by Him.
Always :))
Senyai
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
Hi Roy,
Alas I have no sixes left. This is a 10 star rating if I could give that to you, I would gladly bestow. Your poem goes to the heart of a poet that cries for a sweet release to spill upon the page, the well overflowing that cannot be contained. The Good News must be told. You describe the process intimately...
So lovely, Roy! Says so much in each stanza... each line is a jewel and each stanza a gem because the words that flow are tempered by Him.
Always :))
Senyai
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks Senyai, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We poets can sometimes be accused of writing about life and not living it, but we are observers who informa and delight with words, this is what you did here Roy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
We poets can sometimes be accused of writing about life and not living it, but we are observers who informa and delight with words, this is what you did here Roy, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much Dolly for these great comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mama Baer
What a delightful poem! I love that you recognize the ability to write as a Gift from Above. You certainly possess it. Thank you for sharing your insightful words.
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
What a delightful poem! I love that you recognize the ability to write as a Gift from Above. You certainly possess it. Thank you for sharing your insightful words.
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much Mama, for these great comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from pookietoo
Yes God iscdo good thanks for sharing this poem. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this poem..good luck and best wishes
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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
Yes God iscdo good thanks for sharing this poem. Keep up the great work writing your poems. I enjoyed reading this poem..good luck and best wishes
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much for these great comments and a super review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.