AmaZing Animals
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "AmaZing Animals - N"The A-Z of animals and facts
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Another beautifully written story for what I called it the Encyclopedia for kids. Your entry for N is taking us to the Arctic Ocean where we learn about a beautiful unicorn that lives under the ice. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Another beautifully written story for what I called it the Encyclopedia for kids. Your entry for N is taking us to the Arctic Ocean where we learn about a beautiful unicorn that lives under the ice. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I like that name, Iza, I have been wondering what to call it, I might use that with your permission. It sounds like a grown-up title for kids, which is what I want. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. Have a wonderful week. :)) Sandra. xx
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Yes please, I will be so happy to see it in the library one day. Let me know when you are publishing on paper, I would love a copy
Comment from Ben Colder
Very interesting. I learn more about animal life since reading your post. I had seen these whales but never knew much about them. The blue is also fascinating. Thanks you again Sandy for a great read.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Very interesting. I learn more about animal life since reading your post. I had seen these whales but never knew much about them. The blue is also fascinating. Thanks you again Sandy for a great read.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Bless your heart, dear Chuck! I'm learning a lot too. Someone once said to me, you can't take anything with you when you pass over but love and knowledge, I think that's true. You are so lucky to have seen these narwhals, how wonderful! Thank you so much for the six stars, and your lovely comments. I do appreciate you, my dear friend. Biggest hugs! Sandy. xxxx
Comment from Brett Matthew West
-A whale with a ten foot long tusk. Un garde!
-Since you're talking about more than one Narwhal, shouldn't it be their long spiral tooth instead of its long spiral tooth, which indicates only one being spoken about in this situation?
-Fifty thousands should be fifty thousand
-Interesting facts presented in this posting.
My reviews are mere suggestions. Feel free to use anything that provides assistance and/or chuck the whole shebang.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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-A whale with a ten foot long tusk. Un garde!
-Since you're talking about more than one Narwhal, shouldn't it be their long spiral tooth instead of its long spiral tooth, which indicates only one being spoken about in this situation?
-Fifty thousands should be fifty thousand
-Interesting facts presented in this posting.
My reviews are mere suggestions. Feel free to use anything that provides assistance and/or chuck the whole shebang.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Yes, you are so right, Brett. I have gone back and changed that. Thank you for that. And for telling me about that s on the end of thousand, that's gone too!! :)) Thank you, I really appreciated the review and the pointers. Have a lovely week! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I did know about them but it took me a minute to realize that. It has been years since I even thought about them. This is an interesting essay about them, Sandra. This book could be very educational for other children as well as Eric. Will you have it published? Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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I did know about them but it took me a minute to realize that. It has been years since I even thought about them. This is an interesting essay about them, Sandra. This book could be very educational for other children as well as Eric. Will you have it published? Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Nancy, I do hope so. Yes, I will publish it, I'll be giving them out as presents to the older children, and keep some for when my other grandchildren are old enough. I'm not out to make money from them or any of my books. (It would be nice if Hollywood picked some up!! LOL.) Thanks my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from GWHARGIS
Wow. Well, thank you for educating me on this mysterious sea creature. I love that you informed in an entertaining way yet didnt talk down to your audience. Great job. I'm sure your grandson will enjoy this. Have a great week. Gretchen
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Wow. Well, thank you for educating me on this mysterious sea creature. I love that you informed in an entertaining way yet didnt talk down to your audience. Great job. I'm sure your grandson will enjoy this. Have a great week. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much, Gretchen, for this lovely review. I'm so pleased you thought I'd written it in a way that doesn't talk down to people, children are quite quick to spot that. Have a lovely week! :) Sandra xx
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Again, another wonderful Amazing Animal!
Noticed one typo:
A little interesting snippit (snippet) about the Arctic Bowhead whale.
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Again, another wonderful Amazing Animal!
Noticed one typo:
A little interesting snippit (snippet) about the Arctic Bowhead whale.
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thanks for spotting that, Rebecca, I've made the correction. I'm glad you are still enjoying these alphabet animals. Have a lovely week, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
As usual, a very nice read in your weird animal series. Narwhals! Indeed, very weird with this enormous tusks. These must be very sensitive, and I think they must be constantly aware of them and careful not to hurt one another when they are swimming in a group.
Sandra, thank you for another animal I knew nothing about.
In your very first paragraph, I think you ought to omit the word "although". Feels wrong there.
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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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As usual, a very nice read in your weird animal series. Narwhals! Indeed, very weird with this enormous tusks. These must be very sensitive, and I think they must be constantly aware of them and careful not to hurt one another when they are swimming in a group.
Sandra, thank you for another animal I knew nothing about.
In your very first paragraph, I think you ought to omit the word "although". Feels wrong there.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2020
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Marjon. I'm delighted you enjoyed reading about them. Have a lovely week! :)) Sandra xx
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