~Someday~
Together Forever!57 total reviews
Comment from Sallyo
A sweet someday tribute to your wife... it's not sad though, since it holds the promise of being together again and also living the years before then with a smile. That's my interpretation, anyway.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A sweet someday tribute to your wife... it's not sad though, since it holds the promise of being together again and also living the years before then with a smile. That's my interpretation, anyway.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Sallyo!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written tribute and honor to your deceased wife who is waiting and prepares your place with her in heaven for an eternal bond that cannot ever be unbound on earth or in heaven.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A very well-written tribute and honor to your deceased wife who is waiting and prepares your place with her in heaven for an eternal bond that cannot ever be unbound on earth or in heaven.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Sandra!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the six star review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Badger_29
Quite often I read the author's notes first, especially this time. This filled me with a deep joy and a profound sadness as I truly believe that our craft, along with music is the most capable of vocal deep emotion. It wonderful theme and format.
Thank you so much for sharing this came from the soul
Blessings
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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Quite often I read the author's notes first, especially this time. This filled me with a deep joy and a profound sadness as I truly believe that our craft, along with music is the most capable of vocal deep emotion. It wonderful theme and format.
Thank you so much for sharing this came from the soul
Blessings
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute, Darren!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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Bill, you are a Blessing,
Remain so
Thanks 4 your fellowship here~
Darren
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A 2nd "SALUTE," Darren! Thanks for the kind words and God Bless.
Bill
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You are a-muse-ing, as in
A great inspiration here.
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And . . . you are an "Awesome Writer!" A 2nd "SALUTE!"
Comment from kahpot
"throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart" how beautiful how powerful, the entirety of this poem is excellent, a beautiful tribute to your lost loved one, I love the rhyme and flow in this heartfelt poem, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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"throughout eternity, we'll beat as one heart" how beautiful how powerful, the entirety of this poem is excellent, a beautiful tribute to your lost loved one, I love the rhyme and flow in this heartfelt poem, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Kahpot!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much sadness in your poem Bill, the grief of losing your wife to God and the separation that you could not prevent. I know similar feelings, but everyone's grief is different. You still have great love for her and miss her. It's when valentines, Easter, Thanksgiving, Christmas and birthdays come that we dwell on those we love and miss, a heartfelt write Bill, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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There is much sadness in your poem Bill, the grief of losing your wife to God and the separation that you could not prevent. I know similar feelings, but everyone's grief is different. You still have great love for her and miss her. It's when valentines, Easter, Thanksgiving, Christmas and birthdays come that we dwell on those we love and miss, a heartfelt write Bill, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Dolly!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is absolutely beautiful! Your sentiment so dear and your words so true and filled with meaning. I'm sorry for your loss but as you know this time is only a drop in the bucket compared to the forever that awaits for the two of you to share together.
God bless!
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is absolutely beautiful! Your sentiment so dear and your words so true and filled with meaning. I'm sorry for your loss but as you know this time is only a drop in the bucket compared to the forever that awaits for the two of you to share together.
God bless!
Patty
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Patty!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the six star review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill
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You're very welcome!!!
Have a nice Monday! If that's ever possible!
Patty
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is a very heartfelt poem. I appreciate the imagery as well as the feeling words. I like the idea of the moonbeams, sunshine, and rainbow being gathered to share with the beloved wife. This test of mortality certainly strains us all to learn more about different frequencies of spiritual faith and feeling. Very nice post.
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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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This is a very heartfelt poem. I appreciate the imagery as well as the feeling words. I like the idea of the moonbeams, sunshine, and rainbow being gathered to share with the beloved wife. This test of mortality certainly strains us all to learn more about different frequencies of spiritual faith and feeling. Very nice post.
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," Crystie!
Great hearing from you. Thanks for the review, kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill