Besieged by Ermine White
A Nonet56 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry contest.
You tell of the transition from fall top winter white very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poetry contest.
You tell of the transition from fall top winter white very nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hello Sharon!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
their waning splendor heaves
and moans <-- They fight against the snow, but they're bound to lose, for their time is over.
Very well written with good vocabulary and description. :)
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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their waning splendor heaves
and moans <-- They fight against the snow, but they're bound to lose, for their time is over.
Very well written with good vocabulary and description. :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hello Phyllis!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oooooo...love the wonderfully cold yet 'soul-warming' offering you've got here, Lady D! :) Please tell me, though, that y'all don't have that much snow yet..? :) :) :) I don't know why your words scream 'cold' and then 'held close' -- perhaps the 'ermine', perhaps not -- but your nonet stirs more than just the frigid of winter's snow... :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck, my friend, in the contest! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Oooooo...love the wonderfully cold yet 'soul-warming' offering you've got here, Lady D! :) Please tell me, though, that y'all don't have that much snow yet..? :) :) :) I don't know why your words scream 'cold' and then 'held close' -- perhaps the 'ermine', perhaps not -- but your nonet stirs more than just the frigid of winter's snow... :) :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck, my friend, in the contest! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Good grief, Yvette!
I am so far behind in my replies!
Thank you for your excellent rating and always delightful review!
We may be in the clear of no more snow for Thanksgiving! Whew!
Thank you again!
diane
Comment from Ulla
Awe, That is a beautiful nonet, Diane. You really know how to write it. What a beautiful imagery. It's a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Awe, That is a beautiful nonet, Diane. You really know how to write it. What a beautiful imagery. It's a great entry for the contest and I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hello Ulla!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from June Sargent
Heave and moan they do. Haven't any any significant snowfall yet, but it's coming! White coat of ermine is lovely, along with necklaces of white diamonds on the trees...
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Heave and moan they do. Haven't any any significant snowfall yet, but it's coming! White coat of ermine is lovely, along with necklaces of white diamonds on the trees...
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hello June!
Thank you ever so much!
diane
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
great poetry; lovely words. The image does show the message in your poem wonderfully. Great writing. Good luck at the polls. We are having this kind of weather here.
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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great poetry; lovely words. The image does show the message in your poem wonderfully. Great writing. Good luck at the polls. We are having this kind of weather here.
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Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2019
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Hello Rosemary!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
