Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

good form as always
very differently unique
your closing line is most likely closer to the reality
than the dream
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

You do the same, smileycloud and thanks so much again for reading my work.
I deeply appreciate it.

~Dean

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Dean,
I am entertained as usual. I hope you have a good week. :)

My favorite part is the Satori. Love your play on words.

I don't know about you, but I can't wait for Halloween season! Happy Birthday to Juliette, though.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Me either, Rasmine. The Autumn is my favorite time of the year.
Thanks, enjoy your Monday.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Five torrid days of youthful romance and hot sex!! Of course it was a nightmare! As always, your haiku is able to evoke a great deal of emotion with so few syllables. Well done!

~patty~

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for checking it out, Patty.
Have a manic Monday, lol...

~Dean

reply by Mustang Patty on 03-Jul-2017

you're welcome - and you have a great Monday too