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1-7-1 contest

62 total reviews 
Comment from Gloria ....
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Excellent job with this beauty. I was going to recommend changing the words, but then I read the instruction and you have done it exactly right!!!

Great job and best wishes to you in the contest with this absolute delight.

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    Hi Gloria, thank you so much for a wonderful review you....and thank you for alllll your wonderful stars...this is a serious subject in our world today...not just for kids...but everyone...thank you...
Comment from MissMerri
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A timely message Linda... It is something every mother fears.. a child being snatched away by a stranger. I think it is definitely good advice for any child, but the sad thing is, then a well meaning, grandfatherly type talks to a little girl and she is afraid because of what she has been taught. Sad world we live in.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Adonna, it truly is a sad world...I wish these people would just wake up and stop...you hate to scare the kids like that...but better to have then scared...the killed...it's not just the kids...it's everyone...thank you for a wonderful review....
Comment from MsPetra
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You held true to form. You had a great message here. I can see the thought behind it. This one will linger in my mind and I might just share it with my nieces. Thank you for writing it.
There isn't anything I would change. You did a great job.
Please keep writing.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI MsPetra, thank you so much for a wonderful review...it truly is sad we have to go as far as scaring our kids to protect them...but better safe than sorry....and it's not just the children...it is everyone...thank you
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello l.raven, a good 1-7-1 poem and reminder. Of special note ... "RUN". It is really sad that we must teach our children to be on alert of strangers, but with evil lurking almost everywhere, this is something that we must do. A timely poem. Great complementary artwork choice. Good luck in the contest. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI LateBloomer, so good to see you...it truly is sad we have to put that fear in our kids...better to let them know...and it's not just the kids...it's everyone...anyone...thank you for a wonderful review...and for all your luck...
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written and very good advice given by a parent in this day and age nowhere is safe for a child or adult anywhere good luck in the contest regards Jill

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Jill, that is what I have been saying...it's not just the kids...no one is safe...but it is so sad we have to scare them to protect them...thank you so much for a great review...and for all your good luck...
Comment from rjuselius
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Were you supposed to enter the 1-7-1 contest since you have the same format? A fine poem yet a little bit lacks content.
Thanks for sharing dear linda!
Blessings!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Rebekka, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...Blessing to you...
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Oh how kids need to know this message! How many children could be saved if enough people passed this around. They used to do it in elementary school a lot, but it doesn't seem to be stressed the way it once was. Put this on a poster and plaster it everywhere!

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Rhonda, I agree with you...they need the stress this with the kids today...it is so said we have to scare our kids to protect them...so sad...thank you for a wonderful review...and you take care as well...
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 25-Jan-2017
    But we do have to, or else they become victims.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    so true...sigh...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good wording and the picture you chose for this piece went so well with it. Best wishes in the contest! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Teri, thank you so much for a great review....so glad you like it....it is so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...everyone...thank you for your best wishes...and Blessings to you as well...
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Linda,

This poem is really interesting to read and I enjoyed it.
You are so good at writing all kinds of things which are always great.
Thanks for sharing this with me and I'll be looking for more.

Kat

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Kitty Kat, thank you so very much for a great review...it is so sad we have to scare our kids to protect them...thank you so much
reply by MizKat on 25-Jan-2017
    You're very welcome. Kat
Comment from azwildrosa
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This is a great little poem you have here. It simple with so much to say with so few words. The picture you chose is also a perfect fit. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2017


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2017
    HI Rosa, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...