A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Anonymity"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from alf collier
Hi Dean. I absolutely love that you can take such innocent words and wrest them into such menace. This is brilliant. It wasn't at all musical but had a brilliant cadence to the lines that oozed promise of retribution, Alf
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Hi Dean. I absolutely love that you can take such innocent words and wrest them into such menace. This is brilliant. It wasn't at all musical but had a brilliant cadence to the lines that oozed promise of retribution, Alf
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from RGstar
Smile. I could tell this had a direction or purpose the instant I started reading. Still, there was a poetic charm to it despite the intent, which I understand, as sometimes there has to be justification as the point of reference turns out to be air...with no explanation or reasons why. My thing...sail on by and even compliment the action as it will end there and confidence within your own work will soar as you know you are better than that.
Best wishes,
RG
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Smile. I could tell this had a direction or purpose the instant I started reading. Still, there was a poetic charm to it despite the intent, which I understand, as sometimes there has to be justification as the point of reference turns out to be air...with no explanation or reasons why. My thing...sail on by and even compliment the action as it will end there and confidence within your own work will soar as you know you are better than that.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Tis not me. I take full credit for my sins and have properly atoned. Please don't sick my blood dry.
Did someone really leave you a pan?
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Tis not me. I take full credit for my sins and have properly atoned. Please don't sick my blood dry.
Did someone really leave you a pan?
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from LovnPeace
I couldn't help but smile at this excellent writing. Cruel people do think they get away with being hidden. Nope. There is no such thing. Truth always wins out as does Karma. One of my best friends. Blessings. barbara
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I couldn't help but smile at this excellent writing. Cruel people do think they get away with being hidden. Nope. There is no such thing. Truth always wins out as does Karma. One of my best friends. Blessings. barbara
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
You don't take anonymous criticism well, do you? LOL! Just a tad over the top, don't you think? LOL! Dean, the things that come out of your head are scary, but it's even scarier that they come out of your head! :)
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You don't take anonymous criticism well, do you? LOL! Just a tad over the top, don't you think? LOL! Dean, the things that come out of your head are scary, but it's even scarier that they come out of your head! :)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi DEan,
Oh dear, oh dear, someone has obviously got to you. I'm sure Count von Uberwaldburg would be delighted to give you the use of his dungeon, for a small consideration of course ...
Not knowing who Anonymous is, all I can say is your poem takes a great swipe at him/her ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Hi DEan,
Oh dear, oh dear, someone has obviously got to you. I'm sure Count von Uberwaldburg would be delighted to give you the use of his dungeon, for a small consideration of course ...
Not knowing who Anonymous is, all I can say is your poem takes a great swipe at him/her ...
Patrick
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thanks, Patrick, I just might take you up on your offer although I must admit, I've got quite a spacious and well stocked torture chamber of my own just itching for some use.
They know who they are. I doubt that they'll even attempt to read this after my response to them, heh-heh... I'll probably be getting a WARNING from Tom any minute, although I was rather polite in my sarcastic reply.
Thanks, Patrick. Your comments are duly noted and appreciated, my friend. :)
~Dean
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A couple of years ago I got one from someone who really got my goat. I'm afraid I did get into a slanging match with him, but I see he's no longer here, so perhaps I wasn't the only one. I'll have to go and look up who it was upset you - you never know, it may be the same one that's irritating me at the moment with his 4 star reviews ...
Patrick
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a really creepy one. Could be the start of the screen play. It's still dark out. Maybe I should hide under the blanket. Great writing, my friend~Debbie
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This is a really creepy one. Could be the start of the screen play. It's still dark out. Maybe I should hide under the blanket. Great writing, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from kiwijenny
Anonymous-e
You little mouse
You drab and camouflaged..
You stab in the dark...no wait the grey
Too scared to make your mark
On me you flay...but no claim
No blame
You leave no name...
God bless Dean
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Anonymous-e
You little mouse
You drab and camouflaged..
You stab in the dark...no wait the grey
Too scared to make your mark
On me you flay...but no claim
No blame
You leave no name...
God bless Dean
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Domino 2
I can accept people being ignorant and cruel to an extent, Deano, so long as they're upfront and honest about it, and give us a chance to fire back. Hiding behind a computer, for example, is pure cowardice.
Your usual atmospheric and very creepy style, and I love the 'monster' seeking revenge with the added pain of fear and the unknown, which is piled on in heaps.
Very good flow and disturbing (which is great) graphic gory imagery
Top read, my friend. Here's a sixer.
Cheers, Ray
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I can accept people being ignorant and cruel to an extent, Deano, so long as they're upfront and honest about it, and give us a chance to fire back. Hiding behind a computer, for example, is pure cowardice.
Your usual atmospheric and very creepy style, and I love the 'monster' seeking revenge with the added pain of fear and the unknown, which is piled on in heaps.
Very good flow and disturbing (which is great) graphic gory imagery
Top read, my friend. Here's a sixer.
Cheers, Ray
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from robina1978
Did a Newbie get you so angry? I first thought you were writing about terrorists, It is a nice and well vented rent. It rhymes all the way and flows well. Thanks for sharing.
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Did a Newbie get you so angry? I first thought you were writing about terrorists, It is a nice and well vented rent. It rhymes all the way and flows well. Thanks for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015