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Comment from elliejean
I have to say, Your picture is great with your work. Man you look like the way God is represented. It may be a fluke but it works for me. I love your poem. God was a great creator. He put some of his self in every human being. We are creators too. Great work.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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I have to say, Your picture is great with your work. Man you look like the way God is represented. It may be a fluke but it works for me. I love your poem. God was a great creator. He put some of his self in every human being. We are creators too. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much Eiiidjean. I'm blushing.
Comment from Terror2s
This is wonderful. I loved the way you talk about the uniqueness of people and nature. It puts a perspective on the free gifts around us that are often taken for granted. This was well written and rich in interesting with vocbulary. T2
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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This is wonderful. I loved the way you talk about the uniqueness of people and nature. It puts a perspective on the free gifts around us that are often taken for granted. This was well written and rich in interesting with vocbulary. T2
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank so much, T2
Comment from mumsyone
Your poem is well written. Only one thought ruined it for me, but I am rating on the quality of the writing (per reviewing rules), and not on content.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Your poem is well written. Only one thought ruined it for me, but I am rating on the quality of the writing (per reviewing rules), and not on content.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank you mumsyone. What was that, that ruined it?
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The description: We are all little gods; plus the ending of your poem saying that we are all creators.
Years ago, I cringed when my sister said that we are all gods and we have control over our own lives. That is not my belief, nor do I believe that humans can "create" anything; we can only make things out of what God has already created.
That said, I still appreciate the work you put into your poem, and you certainly have a right to your own feelings and beliefs.
Comment from Jean Lutz
And when He was finished, he declared, "It is good". I do the same for you. Keep on using your creative talent to bless others. I believe talent is given by God himself through the Holy Spirit.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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And when He was finished, he declared, "It is good". I do the same for you. Keep on using your creative talent to bless others. I believe talent is given by God himself through the Holy Spirit.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
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I am blessed by this review. Thank you.
Comment from dancerwriter
Amazing picture( though not truly in God's image.), which represents a lovely, very long piece of poetry.So much it contains,of life, creation, nature evolving and praise to the Lord. Love the words " We're a Human bouquet, in some diverse Array,' unique, and it rhyhmes. I Love poetry which rhymes. A really great effort and it deserves goodmarks.
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Amazing picture( though not truly in God's image.), which represents a lovely, very long piece of poetry.So much it contains,of life, creation, nature evolving and praise to the Lord. Love the words " We're a Human bouquet, in some diverse Array,' unique, and it rhyhmes. I Love poetry which rhymes. A really great effort and it deserves goodmarks.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2012
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Thank you for that wonderful review and stars, dancewriter.
Comment from MAMONIA
A truly remarkable piece of work you created here.
The essence is beautiful as well as the poetry and
imagery you have in this picture.
I would suggest that you get a shave, though.
Only joking. This is magnificent and worthy of
a prize.
Best of luck, my friend.
Marie
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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A truly remarkable piece of work you created here.
The essence is beautiful as well as the poetry and
imagery you have in this picture.
I would suggest that you get a shave, though.
Only joking. This is magnificent and worthy of
a prize.
Best of luck, my friend.
Marie
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much Marie. Glad you appreciated it.
Comment from Slythytove2
Tell you the truth I don't know whether this is poetry or a paragraph gone crazy. Either way it does express a genuine wonderment in a poetic fashon.I found the last little triangles more concise and well defined which made for better reading and understanding.
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Tell you the truth I don't know whether this is poetry or a paragraph gone crazy. Either way it does express a genuine wonderment in a poetic fashon.I found the last little triangles more concise and well defined which made for better reading and understanding.
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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Thanks for the review.
Comment from Deorre Leonard
What a beautiful and well written set up peoms. God is truly amazing... Praise God. thanks for sharing this creative piece. Nicely done. Deorre
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What a beautiful and well written set up peoms. God is truly amazing... Praise God. thanks for sharing this creative piece. Nicely done. Deorre
Comment Written 10-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2012
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this. The six stars are so very generous.