Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Part one, Chapter 12"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from AprilShower
Oh, my! This wasn't known before was it?
I thought Anna already had custody of her child. There certainly is an awful lot of hate coming her ex-husband's family. It sounds like that whole family is nasty and mean.
Interesting story, Barbara. I am wondering if it is true that Troy has hepatitis B.
April
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Oh, my! This wasn't known before was it?
I thought Anna already had custody of her child. There certainly is an awful lot of hate coming her ex-husband's family. It sounds like that whole family is nasty and mean.
Interesting story, Barbara. I am wondering if it is true that Troy has hepatitis B.
April
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where they are trying to prove anna is an unfit mother. i didn't expect the ending though....
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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this is very well written, barbara, a great job writing this chapter where they are trying to prove anna is an unfit mother. i didn't expect the ending though....
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from nora arjuna
Hi Barb, sorry I've missed a lot on your book. Anyway, glad I managed to catch this tense chapter. Oh I hate courtroom banters, especially if the prosecutor is being cunning. Looks like problems still haven't solved for Anna.
"My job was to ensure Michael Rodgers' safety. I was to make [sure -."]
I think this end part should be presented this way. No period after a dash:
"My job was to ensure Michael Rodgers' safety. I was to make sure--"
My editing, sigh, has been going so many rounds. I believe I finally need to stop lol. I need to work on other books as well.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Hi Barb, sorry I've missed a lot on your book. Anyway, glad I managed to catch this tense chapter. Oh I hate courtroom banters, especially if the prosecutor is being cunning. Looks like problems still haven't solved for Anna.
"My job was to ensure Michael Rodgers' safety. I was to make [sure -."]
I think this end part should be presented this way. No period after a dash:
"My job was to ensure Michael Rodgers' safety. I was to make sure--"
My editing, sigh, has been going so many rounds. I believe I finally need to stop lol. I need to work on other books as well.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I will check this out, thank you for taking time to read.
Comment from gypsynet
court drama incites sharp feelings of distate and disgust with your logical sequence of events and good presentation of interchanges.. a very heart-throbbing scne with acute attention to details; i was there! may this be a resounding message against doemestic violence.. great write
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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court drama incites sharp feelings of distate and disgust with your logical sequence of events and good presentation of interchanges.. a very heart-throbbing scne with acute attention to details; i was there! may this be a resounding message against doemestic violence.. great write
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Darn no six to give to you.
FS won't let me
Looks like a lot of truth is coming out
I know one thing you are making the questioning in the court
very interesting.
Gert
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Darn no six to give to you.
FS won't let me
Looks like a lot of truth is coming out
I know one thing you are making the questioning in the court
very interesting.
Gert
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from JW
Wow. This last part definitely makes for an interesting twist in this story. One cannot help but wonder what is going to happen next.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Wow. This last part definitely makes for an interesting twist in this story. One cannot help but wonder what is going to happen next.
Thanks for sharing this. JW
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Barbara. I hope all is well with you. I see you are coming right along with your book...Part 2. Your dialogue is impeccable. Great stuff. Keep up the good work! Bob
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Hi, Barbara. I hope all is well with you. I see you are coming right along with your book...Part 2. Your dialogue is impeccable. Great stuff. Keep up the good work! Bob
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review. Coming from a great author as yourself, I am honored.
Comment from axelbeariter
I wondered what the point of Mr. Brown's accusation was, so you totally surprised me. Anybody who would choose to not read your next chapter after that great hook would have to be brain-dead.----Great stuff.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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I wondered what the point of Mr. Brown's accusation was, so you totally surprised me. Anybody who would choose to not read your next chapter after that great hook would have to be brain-dead.----Great stuff.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words. I always enjoye hearing from you.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
I'm sorry I'm way behind on my reviewing. I've been
swamped with many things plus have not been up to par
of late. I'm trying to get in a little reviewing now
and then until I can get some things sorted.
I love this chapter
it is how lawyers so often slant things
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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barbara:
I'm sorry I'm way behind on my reviewing. I've been
swamped with many things plus have not been up to par
of late. I'm trying to get in a little reviewing now
and then until I can get some things sorted.
I love this chapter
it is how lawyers so often slant things
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for your kind review. I will say a prayer for you.
Comment from MENNIPLOSS
Barbara congratulations by this writing, are a beautiful chapter and of great interest, as always, your work of wonderful quality. a strong hug and my admiration.
menniploss
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Barbara congratulations by this writing, are a beautiful chapter and of great interest, as always, your work of wonderful quality. a strong hug and my admiration.
menniploss
Comment Written 23-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2011
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Thank you for the kind review.
