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Give A Gift Of Sweetness ... Aigner

Defined, decadent and delicious!

61 total reviews 
Comment from Amfunny
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Short, sweet and to the point. One suggestion - I would capitalize Queens since it is a place and a proper noun. Nice job and good luck to you.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL it's not for Queens New York. Just a queen's place, forested hills. Get it. LOL. Thanks so much poet.
reply by Amfunny on 31-Oct-2010
    oh.. okay.. now I get it...
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL okay you. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from pickthorn
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Great job Gungalo! Concise and to the point! Aigner is going to get a lot of new customers with all the free advertising they are getting here on FanStory. LOL I loved your entry. Good luck in the contest.

pickthorn

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks you for a great review and I agree with you 100%. Here's to ya with chocolate.
Comment from Ritsal
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Okay, I want a box - make that a big box. You can keep the ribbon. LOL This is a very good entry in the contest. I wish you luck
Best wishes,
Rita

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL, here ya go, poet. A different but fun write. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from lola29
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Yummie! This is an excellent advertisement for Aigner Chocolates. I'm especially impressed with your last sentence, "Satisfaction for the palate and the senses of love." I love chocolate! Best wishes!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks, Lola. Who doesn't love it eh? Well, I guess there are some ... poor things. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Pam,

You have done a great job on the Aigner Chocolate challenge! You've sold me. Here is my favorite line:

"Taste tempting and taunting; our Aigner recipes will satisfy even the most discerning chocolate lover."

Good luck!
Linda


 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks you. A bit different for this girl but loved the challenge. Such sweet words from you.
Comment from katz meow
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Good sell! I had never of Aigner until they came up with this challenge. Glad to see that you accepted it, and you did an amazing job of promoting their delicious product. "Where's my chocolate?" Excellent job...KAtz

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL I must confess I ate it all. lOL. Love your review girl. Mmmmmmm a good one.
reply by katz meow on 31-Oct-2010
    You better share.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL if I win I will. That much chocolate isn't good for anyone. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from BothePo8
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You ought to go into the ad business. When I first read this, I thought an ad had been mistakenly plce in your poem entry. Then I checked out the contest and found out what you had done. This is a first rate job! It is so professional looking! And the picture is perfect! Leave it to a poet to create an ad for candy!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    How sweet you are my friend. What a tasty review and one I shall cherish. MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
reply by BothePo8 on 31-Oct-2010
    Con mucho gusto!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    De nade, mi amigo!!!!
reply by BothePo8 on 31-Oct-2010
    Estoy seguro que significas "de nada"
reply by BothePo8 on 31-Oct-2010
    Estoy seguro que significas decir, " de nada "
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Bueno, yo intento. LOL. Lo siento mi amigo.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! Mucho gusta tambien.
reply by BothePo8 on 31-Oct-2010
    The ad was excellent!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks you. Hope they think so. LOL.
Comment from richard7
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That's a very convincing(readable!) advertisement encompassing Aigner chocolate and the benefits of choosing chocolate.
decadent chocolate delight
My favourite!
Well written and presented GGLO, very clear to read and associate with, the link to chocolate romance is well placed.
Very much like reading one of the old magazines with the B@W photo or colour of someone enjoying a chocolate.
Good to see Tom knows how to get it sorted out for writers eh!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Actually I sorted it out for myself and now know what happened. Sigh, long story but it won't happen again. Sooooooooooooooo glad you like this one and wish I could send you Aigner's Chocolates. Thanks so much you for a wonderful review.
reply by richard7 on 31-Oct-2010
    Glad it came out right.
    I have chocolate on hand, safe for the night, shops open tomorrow!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    LOL enjoy it and thanks again so very much Richard!!!
Comment from vickib
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Super! What a cool contest. Makes me want to go find some and try it out. I'm known for my sweet tooth so I better get some. Great job not too long, not too short, perfect. I like the family tradition mixed in too. Then the last line, satisfaction for the palate and senses of love. YUM!

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks you. This was truly a different write for me and therefor fun to do. Yum is right!!! Love your taste full review.
Comment from Trybuck
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OK Ok... Where's my sample? I believe you but would believe you better if I had a small piece to try... So.. I'm still waiting...

Very well done, Buck

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2010


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2010
    Thanks poet!! This was fun to do and really tested me for completeness and brevity. LOL. Have a great day ... oh, sending you a huge box of Aigner's Chocolates. Hide them or share them!!!