Quietude
Heroic Crown Of Sonnets - 15 interlinked sonnets.84 total reviews
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
What a lovely piece of write up, I enjoyed it - in the middle lost a little however, the ending was good again,
in open arms that welcome my soft sigh.
Its promise now to me is understood,
[[ Nice lines]]
K
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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What a lovely piece of write up, I enjoyed it - in the middle lost a little however, the ending was good again,
in open arms that welcome my soft sigh.
Its promise now to me is understood,
[[ Nice lines]]
K
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you poet. Nice to hear your comments. It's so long, it's no wonder you got lost in the middle of it. Writing it was a trip.
Comment from misscookie
My wig hat is off to you. What a munificent job you'd. I don't think I could express it more elegant than you did or All your body, mind,soul and, time you put into this. I love the movement of the poem and how your thoughts express every emotionwithin you.
Bravo!!!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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My wig hat is off to you. What a munificent job you'd. I don't think I could express it more elegant than you did or All your body, mind,soul and, time you put into this. I love the movement of the poem and how your thoughts express every emotionwithin you.
Bravo!!!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you MissCookie!!! I did put me into the very core of this one. Your review makes me smile. Happy Sunday!!!!
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You are very welcome, take care.
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You too poet!
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Thank. thank thank. until your next write.
Comment from laren
A great poem that brilliantly chronicles the artwork through author's moods and how his work is shaped. Emotions and feelings are shared. It is very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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A great poem that brilliantly chronicles the artwork through author's moods and how his work is shaped. Emotions and feelings are shared. It is very well written!
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks Laren! This girl was pretty tired out after this write but it was truly well worth the effort to me. MUAHHHHHHHHHHH.
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Muahhhh, thank you from my heart for sharing this great piece,
Laren
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My pleasure but thank YOU!!!!
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Thank you, I wish you a very nice Sunday,
Laren
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May this Sunday see you completely surrounded by love.
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Thank you! I wish you the same,
Laren
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from irsajay
A whole scheme of life is entwined in this poem. The expression of inner thought and mixed with human elements and sometime even brushing nature and universe made it a complete work.
Thanks for sharing a nice work.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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A whole scheme of life is entwined in this poem. The expression of inner thought and mixed with human elements and sometime even brushing nature and universe made it a complete work.
Thanks for sharing a nice work.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thank you poet for an awesome review of this one. I appreciate you taking the time with such a long write.
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You're most welcome.
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
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MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from honeytree
The words have been written beautifully about quietness love and peace.
The words written allowed one to see the peace and quiet times and love within the words written
I loved reading these words very much.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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The words have been written beautifully about quietness love and peace.
The words written allowed one to see the peace and quiet times and love within the words written
I loved reading these words very much.
Honey tree
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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So beautiful your words of review. My smile must be blinding you. Thank you very much.
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I enjoyed reading these words very much.
Honey tree
Comment from Judian James
BRAVO (for those who know me on site G., Bravo in all caps means I am standing in my den in Maine giving you a full ovation, which includes clapping and cheers!!) This is superb. Many quotable lines from each individual piece, impressive number of sonnets without a single blip in the meter, a lovely story told and summed up so beautifully in
"Its promise now to me is understood,
contentment comes to those who knew it would." superb effort! I am very impressed and it's time to become a fan
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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BRAVO (for those who know me on site G., Bravo in all caps means I am standing in my den in Maine giving you a full ovation, which includes clapping and cheers!!) This is superb. Many quotable lines from each individual piece, impressive number of sonnets without a single blip in the meter, a lovely story told and summed up so beautifully in
"Its promise now to me is understood,
contentment comes to those who knew it would." superb effort! I am very impressed and it's time to become a fan
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Wow poet! Thank you so much for this AWESOME review!!! Maine eh? I lived there once but am now in the Virigin Islands on St. Thomas. You humble me with your words and the smile you left here for me is just glowing Thank you, so much!!!!!
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I appreciate what an undertaking that piece was BUT to carry if off with so many, many memorable lines and not a single blip in meter is outstanding!! Plus, I loved the mood you created within your words. superb
Comment from sgalletti
OK...First piece of writing I've read of yours and I am hooked! Having spent many days writing a Crown of Seven Sonnets (twice) you don't need to convince me how difficult these are to write. But give me a break...15? Guess what, I read this piece three times. I wanted to be sure you were serious. And, yes you are! I am very impressed! Sue
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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OK...First piece of writing I've read of yours and I am hooked! Having spent many days writing a Crown of Seven Sonnets (twice) you don't need to convince me how difficult these are to write. But give me a break...15? Guess what, I read this piece three times. I wanted to be sure you were serious. And, yes you are! I am very impressed! Sue
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much Sue for your fabulous words. Oh yeah, I'm serious and this was a dead serious write. Love your review and can't thank you enough!!!! MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Comment from djuan
I wish so badly that I had a (6) to give you. So well done, to have sustained that kind of momentum throughout all 15 sonnets. Simply amazing and beautifully written. One of the best that I've read so far.
Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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I wish so badly that I had a (6) to give you. So well done, to have sustained that kind of momentum throughout all 15 sonnets. Simply amazing and beautifully written. One of the best that I've read so far.
Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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What a wonderful review!!! Thanks djuan for your words of support here.
Comment from Diny
Within my own soliloquy serene,
a masterpiece of loving words is born;
-YES INDEED is true!
IMAGERY is fantastic here:
Just take the portal closest to the moon,
there is no need, you know, to ever knock;
OW I absolutly loved this such talent and patience it takes to write such a crown!- Beautiful and full of lovelyness- Write on dear one I am so impressed- Di
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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Within my own soliloquy serene,
a masterpiece of loving words is born;
-YES INDEED is true!
IMAGERY is fantastic here:
Just take the portal closest to the moon,
there is no need, you know, to ever knock;
OW I absolutly loved this such talent and patience it takes to write such a crown!- Beautiful and full of lovelyness- Write on dear one I am so impressed- Di
Comment Written 26-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2010
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I thank you so very much poet for this fantastic review. A lot of work yes but it never felt that way. Just long. lOL. Gotta concentrate when you do one of these. Thanks again.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You did a wonderful job and I can tell it was hard work. I think you created something special. You told your stores and you linked them together. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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You did a wonderful job and I can tell it was hard work. I think you created something special. You told your stores and you linked them together. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2010
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Thanks so much poet!!!! That linking together is an intricate part of the write and could drive a person crazy. LOL. I really appreciate you reading this one. What stamina you have!!!