Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Cop"memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from JennieClare
A perfectly formed clarity poem - had to look this up as I am really new to this poetry business! Well done - you have summed up what a cop is in this new form of poetry. I really like the last line. JennieClare
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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A perfectly formed clarity poem - had to look this up as I am really new to this poetry business! Well done - you have summed up what a cop is in this new form of poetry. I really like the last line. JennieClare
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thank you
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You're welcome
Comment from honeytree
The world at large and its people are becoming more violent and breaking the law at a steady rate.
I also think that many are hungry and steal food.
I feel we should help those in search of food ,and the warmth of a bed. Our policemen within the world do see horrific scenes, and they must feel sad with their daily work.
Great writing and art work.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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The world at large and its people are becoming more violent and breaking the law at a steady rate.
I also think that many are hungry and steal food.
I feel we should help those in search of food ,and the warmth of a bed. Our policemen within the world do see horrific scenes, and they must feel sad with their daily work.
Great writing and art work.
Honey tree
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from Trybuck
It takes a special person to be a policeman or policewoman these days. Not enough respect for the awesome job they do every day.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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It takes a special person to be a policeman or policewoman these days. Not enough respect for the awesome job they do every day.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thank you
Comment from Mithma
It is a rare topic. Rare way to discuss subject. I like it because of the simple way its written with meaning. Good flow. Nice way of compiling
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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It is a rare topic. Rare way to discuss subject. I like it because of the simple way its written with meaning. Good flow. Nice way of compiling
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thank you.
Comment from CodyJack
So true my friend. This is written very well in such a short poem. You brought out emotions in every word. I see you entered a contest so good luck to you. Great poem. Cody
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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So true my friend. This is written very well in such a short poem. You brought out emotions in every word. I see you entered a contest so good luck to you. Great poem. Cody
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thanks and don't forget to vote :)
Comment from rudywalsh
A nice sentiment to those law inforcers we call cops, I love what you have written but don't entirely agree with it, lucky for us in Britain we have omnibusman who police the police, they are only human like the rest of us and some are as currupt and bent as the next man.
With the law behind them over the years they have created some hideous crimes towards the people they are supposed to protect, including getting away with murder.
Nobody on this earth should have absolute power over there fellow beings.
A very creative thought provoking poem, nicely presented with nice wording.
Thanks for sharing and all the best to you...Rudy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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A nice sentiment to those law inforcers we call cops, I love what you have written but don't entirely agree with it, lucky for us in Britain we have omnibusman who police the police, they are only human like the rest of us and some are as currupt and bent as the next man.
With the law behind them over the years they have created some hideous crimes towards the people they are supposed to protect, including getting away with murder.
Nobody on this earth should have absolute power over there fellow beings.
A very creative thought provoking poem, nicely presented with nice wording.
Thanks for sharing and all the best to you...Rudy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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thank you for the kind review and there are always exceptions. even bad priests sometimes.
Comment from Belinda
This is a different and sweet description about a cop. Thanks to your amiable brother, the whole corps gains recognition through this Clarity Pyramid. I do hope more people and cops read this.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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This is a different and sweet description about a cop. Thanks to your amiable brother, the whole corps gains recognition through this Clarity Pyramid. I do hope more people and cops read this.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Me too thanks.
Comment from Robert D Wilson
Very nice poetry honoring those who faithfully serve us and protect us. This is made even more meaningful in that your bother is a policeman, as well [thank you for including that in the note]. Very good assessment of the policemans' character!
Blessings,
Bob
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Very nice poetry honoring those who faithfully serve us and protect us. This is made even more meaningful in that your bother is a policeman, as well [thank you for including that in the note]. Very good assessment of the policemans' character!
Blessings,
Bob
Comment Written 15-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2010
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Thank you
Comment from Dave the wave
I like your poem you have a hell of a lot of talent keep up the great work I think you ought to do a book of poetry your very good you would sell a buch of copies you work at a pschiatric ward and I have been in them quite a few time there like a second home but they will never fiqure me out they would have to crawl inside my head for that and they have been trying to get in my head for years when your crazy your crazy and no amount of drugs will ever change that or me for that matter take care of yourself your friend always Dave the wave
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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I like your poem you have a hell of a lot of talent keep up the great work I think you ought to do a book of poetry your very good you would sell a buch of copies you work at a pschiatric ward and I have been in them quite a few time there like a second home but they will never fiqure me out they would have to crawl inside my head for that and they have been trying to get in my head for years when your crazy your crazy and no amount of drugs will ever change that or me for that matter take care of yourself your friend always Dave the wave
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Much appriciated.
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you are very welcome your friend always Dave the wave
Comment from Morning Mist
Beautiful poem about men and women who give so much to their communities and country. I was able to go to Washington DC two years ago when Police from all over the world were there. Not only did I meet some wonderful people, I also saw the wall where those who have died in service's had their name. One was my husbands cousin who died in the 1960's. Good luck in the contest. Blessings,
Morning Mist
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Beautiful poem about men and women who give so much to their communities and country. I was able to go to Washington DC two years ago when Police from all over the world were there. Not only did I meet some wonderful people, I also saw the wall where those who have died in service's had their name. One was my husbands cousin who died in the 1960's. Good luck in the contest. Blessings,
Morning Mist
Comment Written 14-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2010
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Again thank you for your kind words and support. Some people don't like Cops so they havent been to forgiving. But this review made my day.