Little Billy
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Twisted Faces in hiding places."memiors from my life experiences.
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Comment from DEWalsh
This work reminds me of the darkness of Poe or Baudelaire and is deep and mysterious as well as very well crafted. Although I do not know the form you manage to express the ugliness of evil while trying to maintain sanity in the midst of chaos. The children to me represent innocence interrupted and the rain is symbolic not of goodness but rather of the death and destruction associated with Noah's flood overcoming all living creatures. Very good but extremely haunting.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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This work reminds me of the darkness of Poe or Baudelaire and is deep and mysterious as well as very well crafted. Although I do not know the form you manage to express the ugliness of evil while trying to maintain sanity in the midst of chaos. The children to me represent innocence interrupted and the rain is symbolic not of goodness but rather of the death and destruction associated with Noah's flood overcoming all living creatures. Very good but extremely haunting.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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Yes its very dark a side we all have from the garden of eden.
Comment from Valkarie
like ths piece as it has a powerful overtone which leaves the reader thinking about the whole piece. A most visual and concise write with a chilling note about it that is so enigmatic which makes the piece more interesting.
The rhythm of his piece captures the tension overall making the poem into a most creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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like ths piece as it has a powerful overtone which leaves the reader thinking about the whole piece. A most visual and concise write with a chilling note about it that is so enigmatic which makes the piece more interesting.
The rhythm of his piece captures the tension overall making the poem into a most creative piece of writing.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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wow thank you.
Comment from rudywalsh
Very well written.
It must have been some task finding the words at the end of each line to rhyme with faces, a good way to write a poem, well thought-out with great presentation, very creative and sounding almost musical. A very bouncy flow with great use of words.
Alltogether yout poem and image has come together quite artistically, it would look good in a frame.
Well done, thanks for the pleasure and have a great weekend...Rudy
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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Very well written.
It must have been some task finding the words at the end of each line to rhyme with faces, a good way to write a poem, well thought-out with great presentation, very creative and sounding almost musical. A very bouncy flow with great use of words.
Alltogether yout poem and image has come together quite artistically, it would look good in a frame.
Well done, thanks for the pleasure and have a great weekend...Rudy
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Comment Written 04-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2010
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thank you rudy