Comment from Barthalamew

Excellent

I like this book and the way in which you are writing it. Everything seems to flow so naturally and your characters are so well adjusted. The flow is really good and you don't drag your readers behind you to have a following.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010

Thank you for your kind words.

Comment from anabelle

Excellent

It is us who thank you Barbara. Wonderful reading you're providing us with. I know I've enjoyed every bit of it and will continue enjoying until the end.

Thanks for the good read. We can assume Leya's going to be all right?

Regards, anabelle

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010

Thank you for your kind review and continued support. I do appreciate it.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a very well written chapter. Steven and Leya appears to be ready to talk seriously about their relationship. Maybe they could come to a compromise on the bikini and the conservative bathing suits. Say fifty-fifty of each one. (LOL)

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 Comment Written 20-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2010

I like the 50/50 idea. I wonder what Steven will agree to. HUMMM, thank you for your review and support. It means a lot to me.