Tantalizing Eyes
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Chapter 6; part4"Dishonesty VS Love. Which will win?
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Comment from jadapenn
This was so special. I love the interaction between the two. He keeps himself aloof - for how long Steven, for how long. You're not made of rock, boy. Lol. I think Leya is right, Peggy should be posted somewhere else where she can practise her jealousy.
Well written, girlfriend. I am so laid back, I can't write a word. haha. luv jada
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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This was so special. I love the interaction between the two. He keeps himself aloof - for how long Steven, for how long. You're not made of rock, boy. Lol. I think Leya is right, Peggy should be posted somewhere else where she can practise her jealousy.
Well written, girlfriend. I am so laid back, I can't write a word. haha. luv jada
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Jada, not writing, now I am worried about you. I may have to come to Africa and check on you.. Thank you for your review and support. I couldn't do it without you..
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written. You are beginning to show emotions between Leya and Steven. Your dialogue is smooth. Good job.
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"And why you're (are you) still wearing that ring?"
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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This is very well written. You are beginning to show emotions between Leya and Steven. Your dialogue is smooth. Good job.
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"And why you're (are you) still wearing that ring?"
Comment Written 27-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2009
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Thank you for the finding the error. I will take care of it ASAP. I appreciate your continued support. Thank you for the 6. I am doing the happy dance.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
