Chasing the Elusive Dream
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Everyone Has a Breaking Point"A southern couple's journey in the 60's,70's & 80'
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Comment from butterflykiss
I've been in your shoes, it wasn't as funny as reading this. You nail men and children, we seem to take the blame no matter what happened, or who was right or wrong. Your story made me laugh, I enjoyed it very much.
Butterflykiss
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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I've been in your shoes, it wasn't as funny as reading this. You nail men and children, we seem to take the blame no matter what happened, or who was right or wrong. Your story made me laugh, I enjoyed it very much.
Butterflykiss
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
Beth
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You're welcome Beth, I enjoyed your story.
Butterflykiss
Comment from eliz100
This is the second piece I have read of yours and this one was enjoyable as well. It is well written. I do not see any room for improvement.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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This is the second piece I have read of yours and this one was enjoyable as well. It is well written. I do not see any room for improvement.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Thank you for the review, I'm so glad your found it enjoyable to read.
Beth
Comment from WRITER1
Men can be such pains I realize just how you must have felt. I hate to be late, but my husbands family is the opposite. I had to retrain him. Good job!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Men can be such pains I realize just how you must have felt. I hate to be late, but my husbands family is the opposite. I had to retrain him. Good job!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Thank for reading and comment. I appreciate the review.
Beth
Comment from ladybird
An interesting little cameo of life, and well written. The writing is clear and concise, the humorous touches bring a smile to the lips. And the take on men's views of women working is very true, at least in earlier days. An enjoyable read, well done.
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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An interesting little cameo of life, and well written. The writing is clear and concise, the humorous touches bring a smile to the lips. And the take on men's views of women working is very true, at least in earlier days. An enjoyable read, well done.
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Ladybird, Thanks for your review and I appreciate your comments.
Beth
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You're welcome.
Comment from Lokman
as the innocent of victim of woman who--awkward
new prospective on what--perspective
husband, while not originator of this --missing word
If I child had a problem--a instead I
fuming, and taping the horn--tapping
Hello, this was a fun and interestingstory to read. You did an excellent job with the cultural background. I do think it might help to show more of your feelings previous to the accident so we can feel the buildup. All in all very good with some easily correctable errors.
Lokman
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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as the innocent of victim of woman who--awkward
new prospective on what--perspective
husband, while not originator of this --missing word
If I child had a problem--a instead I
fuming, and taping the horn--tapping
Hello, this was a fun and interestingstory to read. You did an excellent job with the cultural background. I do think it might help to show more of your feelings previous to the accident so we can feel the buildup. All in all very good with some easily correctable errors.
Lokman
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2009
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Thank for finding some things I need to correct.
Beth
