CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from c_lucas
Most lives, we start with nothing, build up to a higher level before we fall bach to not having anything. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Most lives, we start with nothing, build up to a higher level before we fall bach to not having anything. Very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Thanks very much for your review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
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You're welcome, Sue. Charlie
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Our Common Thread' is an intriguing piece. This talented poet has with a minimum of words, deftly described life's certainties. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this caliber.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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'Our Common Thread' is an intriguing piece. This talented poet has with a minimum of words, deftly described life's certainties. It was a pleasure to read and review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Duchess, your review of this piece is so appreciated and your words are most encouraging. Thank you for your lovely compliments. Sue
Sue, you're more than welcome. Take care.
All the best,
the Duchess
Comment from sharon fallis
I just read your piece on the Fibonacci poem... Very interesting. I loved your poem too. Very good bit of writing and well portrayed. Good imagery. Thanks for sharing. Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I just read your piece on the Fibonacci poem... Very interesting. I loved your poem too. Very good bit of writing and well portrayed. Good imagery. Thanks for sharing. Sharon
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Sharon, glad you liked the notes. And thanks for your very generous review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Roisin
Wow Sue! Your even doing mathematical poems now!! I love this. Your chosen words are beautiful and the little bit of rhyme helps bond them together. It's an interesting form and you've presented it really well. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Wow Sue! Your even doing mathematical poems now!! I love this. Your chosen words are beautiful and the little bit of rhyme helps bond them together. It's an interesting form and you've presented it really well. Great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I do love the beauty of mathematics. Sometimes, I just get astounded! Thanks for your great review! Sue :-))
Comment from Judian James
This is true but there's something sad and sorry about this one as well. You hit the nail on the head and I don't know if I ever would have thought of it, but we do search and search, chasing with that initial cry lodged in our throats, wanting ... waiting ... until we die. How many of us feel fulfilled at that moment I wonder. Good
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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This is true but there's something sad and sorry about this one as well. You hit the nail on the head and I don't know if I ever would have thought of it, but we do search and search, chasing with that initial cry lodged in our throats, wanting ... waiting ... until we die. How many of us feel fulfilled at that moment I wonder. Good
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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The complexities of human needs are astounding. Some are very fortunate to feel that moment of fulfillment at the end. Would be icing on the cake. Thanks for your review, Jude. Sue
Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue
After tryin to work out the Fabo technique and subsequent migrane, I' took a bottle of aspirin and am now fine! ;-).
Excellent and appropriate cry and die rhyme.
Also 'yearning' and 'fulfillment' are very fruatrating human desires. I 'yearn' to be 'fulfilled' BY STOPPING ''yearning' for 'fulfillment' resulting in contented bliss. Hang on, workin that one out has brought my migraine back. LMAO
Very succinct (? right word) for 'short, sweet and to the point), thoughtful profundity. Excellent creativity which I hope 'fulfilled' you for a day ;-). Love, Ray xx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Hi, Sue
After tryin to work out the Fabo technique and subsequent migrane, I' took a bottle of aspirin and am now fine! ;-).
Excellent and appropriate cry and die rhyme.
Also 'yearning' and 'fulfillment' are very fruatrating human desires. I 'yearn' to be 'fulfilled' BY STOPPING ''yearning' for 'fulfillment' resulting in contented bliss. Hang on, workin that one out has brought my migraine back. LMAO
Very succinct (? right word) for 'short, sweet and to the point), thoughtful profundity. Excellent creativity which I hope 'fulfilled' you for a day ;-). Love, Ray xx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Yeah, mathematics can cause one to O.D.! HA! We humans are never fulfilled! Each moment, we're scrounging! LOL!! Pitiful, aren't we. Thanks for your awesome review! That makes me 1/3 fulfilled. :-)) Sue
Comment from medicnate
Very good job sticking to the rules of the style. I like this poem; it's simple, yet powerful. I really like your painting. It has an African Art feel to it. This may seem a little strange, but I'll tell you what it looks like to me. I think it looks like an old woman sitting cross legged with a child in her lap. That's just my thought. It is a nice piece of work.
~medicnate~
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Very good job sticking to the rules of the style. I like this poem; it's simple, yet powerful. I really like your painting. It has an African Art feel to it. This may seem a little strange, but I'll tell you what it looks like to me. I think it looks like an old woman sitting cross legged with a child in her lap. That's just my thought. It is a nice piece of work.
~medicnate~
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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The beauty of art is how each of us view it differently. Thanks for your great review. Glad you enjoyed this piece. With regards, Sue
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is really nice. Every one of us can identify with these words because that is our story. I like the style of your poem, and i enjoyed reading it. kudos
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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This is really nice. Every one of us can identify with these words because that is our story. I like the style of your poem, and i enjoyed reading it. kudos
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Yep, we're all in that same boat. :-)) Thanks for your review, Perp. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
You are quite a cultured one aren't you Sue! You obviously LOVE your art friend because you always produce some stunning work when it comes to incorporating it into one of your poems. Fibonacci, rolls off the tongue, was he in the Sopranos? Joking!! ha ha. I'm not cultured, excellent work friend and you know it!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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You are quite a cultured one aren't you Sue! You obviously LOVE your art friend because you always produce some stunning work when it comes to incorporating it into one of your poems. Fibonacci, rolls off the tongue, was he in the Sopranos? Joking!! ha ha. I'm not cultured, excellent work friend and you know it!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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Yeah, he was the dude who put the hit out on Fettucini. Ha! So glad you like the artwork I pick, cuz I go through SO much drama to find just what I want. I sometimes appear "cultured", but really am extremely tacky. LOL!! Sue
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Ha ha! do we have a trickle of humor sneaking back there Sue, keep it coming!
Comment from Jazh
How do you know all of this stuff?? That is really interesting, even though I don't like maths. It's a lovely poem, with an unusual (to me) rhythm. I like the theme too. Well done. :)
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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How do you know all of this stuff?? That is really interesting, even though I don't like maths. It's a lovely poem, with an unusual (to me) rhythm. I like the theme too. Well done. :)
Comment Written 25-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2009
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I just can't stop trying to learn new things all the time! Drives me nuts! LOL!!! So glad you liked this one. Always appreciate your reviews...Sue :-)