Comment from Jazh

Excellent

This is a great poem, with a message....I really enjoyed it. It flows well, and there are some nice unintentional rhymes in there as well. I totally agree with its message too. :)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009

Okay, only with you can I say this: a little bragging here....I intended the rhymes! LOL!! Hey, I had to stretch myself. Sometimes we do get those nice unintentionals (bonus!), but had to work at this one. Thanks so much for your great review. Sue

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

You get back to the original word "kindness" with logical progression and grace - lovely rictameter form and a most thoughtful message - kindness as contagion - love the concept.
Brooke

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009

Yep, the good ole Golden Rule can be contagious. Now, if only we'd start spreading it around! ha! Thanks so much for your review, Brook.....always, Sue

Comment from carl8447

Excellent

I like the style, I've never heard of it before. I have to try it out. it looks like you perfected it.

Good job and excellent read.

Carl

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2009

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2009

Carl, the rictameter is a great structure to work with. Like a free verse, yet with restrictions. Huh??? LOL! Thanks so much for your very kind review. Sue