CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Domino
Hi, Sue. There's a thin line, especially fa most blokes (apparently ;-)), and you depict it brilliantly and succinctly in this excellent entry (no pun).
Good luck n best wishes, ray xx
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
Hi, Sue. There's a thin line, especially fa most blokes (apparently ;-)), and you depict it brilliantly and succinctly in this excellent entry (no pun).
Good luck n best wishes, ray xx
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Yes, especially for the blokes. Ha! With your most awesome review, I'm not sure if I'm having feelings of lust or love! LOL!! You know I luv ya, Ray. Thanks for the great compliments. Means a lot. Sue
Comment from Roisin
Great entry to the contest, Sue. Your words are so true and they suit this form perfectly. It's difficult to make such short lines and have them make sense. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
PS I see your doing well in the nonet contest. Yours deserves to win - it got my vote, it's hilarious, especially because it's true.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
Great entry to the contest, Sue. Your words are so true and they suit this form perfectly. It's difficult to make such short lines and have them make sense. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
PS I see your doing well in the nonet contest. Yours deserves to win - it got my vote, it's hilarious, especially because it's true.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Don't know where my mind was just now when I wrote this, but hey...must mean I'm still alive and well. HA!! Thanks so much for your great review! Sue :-))
Comment from joan marie
Got a little chuckle out of this. Only because we so often analyze the hell out of everything. This says to me just let go. joan marie
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
Got a little chuckle out of this. Only because we so often analyze the hell out of everything. This says to me just let go. joan marie
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2009
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Joan Marie, when the lust/love thing happens, like you say, don't overanalyze it!! Ha! Thanks for your great review. Sue