CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from NightWriter
"Music" is perfectly told and so true. Life without music is indeed unthinkable. It crosses generations and borders, improves moods and stimulates brain cells. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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"Music" is perfectly told and so true. Life without music is indeed unthinkable. It crosses generations and borders, improves moods and stimulates brain cells. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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NightWriter, music is so important to me, that it does dawn on me at times what in the world would we do without it?!! From rock to classical to jazz to R&B and the list goes on to international folk, etc. Thank you so much for your review. Sue
Comment from TinyTeena
Well done! You have maintained the required syllable count in all lines except line 2 - here there are 5 syllables instead of 4. The thoughts expressed are very true - that music can bridge the gap between languages and culture, whether this be by instrument or song. Everyone can feel the beat and enjoy music without actually understanding the words that are sung. The flow at the start and end of the poem is well done - running from Music and ending with Music - very meaningful words.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Well done! You have maintained the required syllable count in all lines except line 2 - here there are 5 syllables instead of 4. The thoughts expressed are very true - that music can bridge the gap between languages and culture, whether this be by instrument or song. Everyone can feel the beat and enjoy music without actually understanding the words that are sung. The flow at the start and end of the poem is well done - running from Music and ending with Music - very meaningful words.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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I started this contest and am the first to BLOW IT! HA! Thanks for your telling me that!! So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for your lovely review and compliments. :-)) Sue
Comment from Jenia
Music is the nectar of life. Without it there is nothing. I can't even imagine such a thing.
Very well done. I sincerely enjoyed your expression, creativity, and ability to form images with your chosen words.
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Music is the nectar of life. Without it there is nothing. I can't even imagine such a thing.
Very well done. I sincerely enjoyed your expression, creativity, and ability to form images with your chosen words.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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What a lovely review. I really appreciate it! So glad you enjoyed this form. Life without music? No life! :-)) Sue
Comment from Minglement
Oh, this is a great entry! Great subject and so true. I think of all the songs I enjoy, even though I don't 'understand' the words. Music is a bridge. Wonderful poem. Good luck and thanks for sponsoring the contest. Now I need to come up with some inspiration.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Oh, this is a great entry! Great subject and so true. I think of all the songs I enjoy, even though I don't 'understand' the words. Music is a bridge. Wonderful poem. Good luck and thanks for sponsoring the contest. Now I need to come up with some inspiration.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Music is a bridge, Marcia. So true. Thanks for your contest idea. Everyone seems to be enjoying it. :-)) Sue
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You're welcome. Just lovely. Take care, Marcia
Comment from Firefly54
This little poem certainly fits the description - thanks for your author notes so we could check it out! its a well executed poem to, and interesting subject
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This little poem certainly fits the description - thanks for your author notes so we could check it out! its a well executed poem to, and interesting subject
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Firefly, so glad you liked this form. I liked it so much, I did 2 of them! Thank you for your very kind review. Sue
Comment from Jazh
This is a lovely poem, Sue....a subject dear to my heart, as a musician! Nice flow to it, and some great alliteration. A good example for the contest! Good luck with it. :)
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This is a lovely poem, Sue....a subject dear to my heart, as a musician! Nice flow to it, and some great alliteration. A good example for the contest! Good luck with it. :)
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2009
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Yes, I love your cello photo! I adore Bach's Cello suite #1!! But then, who doesn't??? Are you an accomplished player? Thanks so much for your review! Sue
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I am somewhat 'accomplished' on violin...that was my professional instrument. I play cello, piano, guitar, flute and recorder to varying degrees of profiency! Pretty rusty now...I just muck around with the electric instruments.
The review was my pleasure. :)
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Oh, my gosh!! I would LOVE to play an instrument! I think I would have been a decent piano player had I had lessons. It just "feels right". I can pick our chords easy. I have a good ear for music. But, I never did it. Never too late for anything, though!
So cool you can play ALL those instruments. What a beautiful thing to do; be able to pick one up and just make your own music. DON'T GET RUSTY!!! Play!!!
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It's never too late to pick up an instrument....I didn't start cello until a couple of years ago. Do it or you'll regret it. :) My best students have been "mature". Cheers. :)
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You know....I just might do it!!! Thanks for the encouragement!
You're a delight!
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Fill the empty spaces in your house with music. :)
Btw...can you tell my mother I'm a delight?? She's always missed that part of me!! ROFL