CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 76 "A Man's Word"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Minglement
Thanks for introducing me to a fun new poetic form. I don't think we've had a contest for this, since I've been on the site (which isn't long). Maybe your beautiful poem will inspire one. Great job.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Thanks for introducing me to a fun new poetic form. I don't think we've had a contest for this, since I've been on the site (which isn't long). Maybe your beautiful poem will inspire one. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Marcia, I saw Ward9 did this form the other day and had not seen it before. So, I had to try. I think you have a good idea there. I'll think about sponsoring one. Thanks for the idea. And for your great review. So glad you liked it! Sue
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Marcia, I just started the contest you thought of. Would love for you to join up. Only $2.00!
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Oooh, cool! Bless you. I'll check it out. Would love to try one! Thanks.
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Well, I tried, but I guess I didn't do very well. It was fun. Might try it again sometime. Thanks. Marcia
Comment from Adri7enne
Good testimony to keeping your word. Your message is real and honest. Love the art work. Very artistic presentation. The hands seem to hold the world, as a man's word holds his character. Good job.
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Good testimony to keeping your word. Your message is real and honest. Love the art work. Very artistic presentation. The hands seem to hold the world, as a man's word holds his character. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good afternoon Sue. I admire your ability to work on different styles of poems. I found not only the shape good but the message to be powerful, that's the way thiongs used to be. Thanks again, Loyd
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Good afternoon Sue. I admire your ability to work on different styles of poems. I found not only the shape good but the message to be powerful, that's the way thiongs used to be. Thanks again, Loyd
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
Comment from Roisin
I love this, Sue. It's a really interesting format - I might give it a go myself. The poem itself is beautiful. Your well chosen words read so well with such rhythm. I really wish I could stop rhyming - it's starting to annoy me, lol! Every time I try to write something like this, my pen just finds a rhyme! You've done a great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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I love this, Sue. It's a really interesting format - I might give it a go myself. The poem itself is beautiful. Your well chosen words read so well with such rhythm. I really wish I could stop rhyming - it's starting to annoy me, lol! Every time I try to write something like this, my pen just finds a rhyme! You've done a great job.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Hey, I just started a contest for the Rictameter. Would LOVE for you to sign up. Only $2.00!
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Okay - I'm in. I'll go and check it out now.
Roisin x
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
A wonderful write and one that I wish all men followed. There are only three things that can never be taken from a man and they are his integrity, honor and his family jewels... Awesome write my friend... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Hello my friend,
A wonderful write and one that I wish all men followed. There are only three things that can never be taken from a man and they are his integrity, honor and his family jewels... Awesome write my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Nothing like knowing you can take someone's word, isn't it? A great feeling. Integrity: the backbone of civility. I really enjoyed writing in this form and so glad you liked the content! Thanks so much, Sue
Comment from Hitcher
Love the artwork, your words fit like a glove to it, I like this style of poetry and will definitely have to give it ago my very busy, creative friend. Reminds one of the old saying a mans word is his bond, and so it should be! I liked this one Sue, very much.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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Love the artwork, your words fit like a glove to it, I like this style of poetry and will definitely have to give it ago my very busy, creative friend. Reminds one of the old saying a mans word is his bond, and so it should be! I liked this one Sue, very much.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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So glad you made comment about the image. I felt very strong about it. It just felt right...very honest. So glad you liked it, also. Yes, a man's word is his bond.....just about extinct with lawyers 'n such. So glad you liked this one, Hitch. (Cause, you're a manly man!!!!) Ha! :-)) Sue
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Just started a writing prompt contest on the Rictameter. JOIN UP! Only $2.00!! Come one....come all!!!
Comment from MJMuraco
Your poem was great and had a strong message about Man's word. I believe people who always keep their word are full of integrity. The artwork went perfect. Thanks also for educating me on the different types of poetic writing. I only know the simple stuff.
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Your poem was great and had a strong message about Man's word. I believe people who always keep their word are full of integrity. The artwork went perfect. Thanks also for educating me on the different types of poetic writing. I only know the simple stuff.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
Comment from Marathonwriter
A rictameter. I learned something new today! All the different forms of poetry make my head swim. I enjoyed this and am amazed by how well you did. It seems that writing in this form would be constraining (all I've ever written is free verse LOL.) Thanks for sharing :-)Chris
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A rictameter. I learned something new today! All the different forms of poetry make my head swim. I enjoyed this and am amazed by how well you did. It seems that writing in this form would be constraining (all I've ever written is free verse LOL.) Thanks for sharing :-)Chris
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Comment from Domino
You've sure become an accomplished an versatile poet in a short time, Sue. Great message of integrity returned here.
Best wishes, Ray xx
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You've sure become an accomplished an versatile poet in a short time, Sue. Great message of integrity returned here.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2009
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I just noticed something. Your #3 ranking symbol (the bear) fits you just perfectly. Like a BIG TEDDY BEAR! LOL!!! Had to try this form when I saw it. I love it! Thanks much for your review, Ray and your compliments, Sue
Comment from Arkine
It's interesting how some poetry makes, designs of sorts. This is a good poem, if only more people were honest. It's sad in a way, the rising crime rates, desperate people are now turning to crime to solve financial, or personal goals/greed. I know there are still honest people, this poems reminds me of that fact and lends some comfort in these trying times. Great job!
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It's interesting how some poetry makes, designs of sorts. This is a good poem, if only more people were honest. It's sad in a way, the rising crime rates, desperate people are now turning to crime to solve financial, or personal goals/greed. I know there are still honest people, this poems reminds me of that fact and lends some comfort in these trying times. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2009