CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Diny
THis was one of my favorites thus far in the contest- because i felt so wierd reading it- it made me remember those papers from yearsago- and the feelings of hoe 10 years was all desolved in minutes like it never mattered- WOW good emotional references the vs. seperating names- powerful!- GOOD luck-Di
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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THis was one of my favorites thus far in the contest- because i felt so wierd reading it- it made me remember those papers from yearsago- and the feelings of hoe 10 years was all desolved in minutes like it never mattered- WOW good emotional references the vs. seperating names- powerful!- GOOD luck-Di
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Diny, yes...we go through the motions and emotions for a divorce. But there is something about getting the papers that is such a finality; a loss of so many hoped-for dreams. A life intended that wasn't fulfilled. A heartbreak, in a nutshell. Very surreal to see the decree. I looked at mine with just a glance and filed it, never to see it again. We both took it very hard. Sorry you had to go through the same thing. But, we do move on (thank goodness!) - Thank you for your very generous review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Amicus
I enjoyed reading this poignant poem about the day a divorce is finalized. It was well crafted and flowed smoothly.
No revisions needed. Its a good read.
Well done.
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I enjoyed reading this poignant poem about the day a divorce is finalized. It was well crafted and flowed smoothly.
No revisions needed. Its a good read.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from steevie
a moving piece that you penned
it's so final when we get that piece of paper and even though it's justa piece of paper, the impact is huge on our life
well done, Sixteezkid
steve
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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a moving piece that you penned
it's so final when we get that piece of paper and even though it's justa piece of paper, the impact is huge on our life
well done, Sixteezkid
steve
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Yes, Very surreal. Thank you, Steevie for your great review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from jeslaf
THIS IS AWESOME! You are on fire lately, my friend, and I am so excited to read what comes next. Brevity can be very difficult and this packs one helluva punch. Bravo! :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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THIS IS AWESOME! You are on fire lately, my friend, and I am so excited to read what comes next. Brevity can be very difficult and this packs one helluva punch. Bravo! :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Brevity is very difficult, but sometimes I find it so suitable, because it does make me pause to consider each word. Ever notice in verbal conversation how much can be said in such few words? When someone else can just babble on for 10 minutes and not even make a point? HA!!!! Makes you want to say, "TRIM IT!" - LOL! Thanks so much for your great review. Always so appreciated. Yours, Sue
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello my friend,
Heart breaking to say the least... All to common in the world today... Love seems not to last a lifetime as it did once before... Awesome write and good luck with the contest my friend... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Hello my friend,
Heart breaking to say the least... All to common in the world today... Love seems not to last a lifetime as it did once before... Awesome write and good luck with the contest my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Dreamdancer, yes, all too common. We thought it was ours to last for always. Thank you for your kind review and comments. Your fan, Sue
Comment from amada
This is a great fifteen words story. Much said in the short lines and in the image. "Our names, separated by vs." Powerful, and sad.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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This is a great fifteen words story. Much said in the short lines and in the image. "Our names, separated by vs." Powerful, and sad.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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amada, it is a very difficult thing to see: those papers. Thank you very much for your kind review and words. With regards, Sue
Comment from Eli Wilde
Hi 60's,
I think each stanza is powerful here, but your final line shows how this can (at times) hit both sides of the separation.
Very good title and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Frank
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Hi 60's,
I think each stanza is powerful here, but your final line shows how this can (at times) hit both sides of the separation.
Very good title and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Frank
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Yes, no matter the circumstances, it is still a very difficult thing for both. Thank you very much for your review and compliments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
A sad but short piece in which you have brought out your feelings strongly you have done well for the contest good luck regards Fuller
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A sad but short piece in which you have brought out your feelings strongly you have done well for the contest good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from Jazh
This is a very effective poem: sad and regretful. It suggests perfection in its ending which was not there in its duration: "Our signatures-/Perfectly penned". Good luck in the contest. :)
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This is a very effective poem: sad and regretful. It suggests perfection in its ending which was not there in its duration: "Our signatures-/Perfectly penned". Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
Comment from Domino
Very real and sad, Sue.
Same thing happened ta me, but I didn't cry til I was outa sight. I bet that devil LOL, not that I'm bitter, LMAO!
Very effectively done an good luck, Ray xx
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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Very real and sad, Sue.
Same thing happened ta me, but I didn't cry til I was outa sight. I bet that devil LOL, not that I'm bitter, LMAO!
Very effectively done an good luck, Ray xx
Comment Written 24-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2009
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We move on, but it still stays with us in some form. Why not? It was a huge part of our lives? 'Course, wouldn't go back for a million quid now! HA! Thanks for your review, Ray. :-)) Sue