CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from joan marie
It was a little light for my eyes to see well. But it was a lovely description of a wedding and used the words wisely. Good read. joan marie
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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It was a little light for my eyes to see well. But it was a lovely description of a wedding and used the words wisely. Good read. joan marie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Yes, when I did those colors, I thought they looked so "wedding-ish", and knew they were light. But, I appreciate your bringing that up. So, I went back and just changed the font to black. Much better!! Thank you for commenting on it. And for your lovely review! :-)) Sue
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I liked the color scheme but it isn't the memory that goes first it's vision. lol at least mine. jm
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Oh, heck yes! I'd take on a few more wrinkles around the eyes if I could get that reading sight back again! LOL!!!
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Maybe it's the wrinkles I am having taken off that are causing the problem. LOL jm
Comment from Roisin
Oh Sue, this is so beautiful. Not only have you penned a beautiful, heart-felt poem, you've managed to incorporate the required words too. Isn't there something about weddings that simply the mention of them brings a tear to the eye. Your rhymes are perfect as is your meter and flow. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Oh Sue, this is so beautiful. Not only have you penned a beautiful, heart-felt poem, you've managed to incorporate the required words too. Isn't there something about weddings that simply the mention of them brings a tear to the eye. Your rhymes are perfect as is your meter and flow. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Roisin, this was one of the tougher ones (of this type of contest). Took a bit of time. I do love the 8-6-8-6 iambic meter. I thought it would sound rather nice with a wedding theme. Thank you very much for your lovely review and compliments! Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Judian James
Well done. Everyone loves a wedding!! Is that your daughter in the photo? Anyway, your piece is in perfect rhyme and meter. excellent entry.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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Well done. Everyone loves a wedding!! Is that your daughter in the photo? Anyway, your piece is in perfect rhyme and meter. excellent entry.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2009
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No, it's just a photo I uploaded from google. Thank you very much for the great review and your compliments. Always appreciated, Jude - Sue
