CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 138 "The feeling's mutual..."A collection of poetry
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Comment from Perp Ihebom
A beautiful poem indeed. It captures the mood of the moment just before the start of a work of art. I like the simplicity of the poem as well as its brevity and simple diction. cheers
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A beautiful poem indeed. It captures the mood of the moment just before the start of a work of art. I like the simplicity of the poem as well as its brevity and simple diction. cheers
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from joan marie
An excellent way of describing what we all fear Writer's Block or in this case Painter's block. Excellent language choices greated a great image. Great read. joan marie
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An excellent way of describing what we all fear Writer's Block or in this case Painter's block. Excellent language choices greated a great image. Great read. joan marie
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from nitad
Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
Much like the empty page stares back at the writer, waiting to be brought to life with rich characters and well chosen words. Well done, I enjoyed this one very much. Good luck in the contest.
Take care,
Nita
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Empty canvas stares
Blankly back at artist
Wanting to be brushed
By strokes of genius
Much like the empty page stares back at the writer, waiting to be brought to life with rich characters and well chosen words. Well done, I enjoyed this one very much. Good luck in the contest.
Take care,
Nita
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Francis99
Ordinarily I wouldn't go for puns in poetry, but this one works. It also evokes, for a writer, that blank sheet of paper, or more modernly, blank screen.
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Ordinarily I wouldn't go for puns in poetry, but this one works. It also evokes, for a writer, that blank sheet of paper, or more modernly, blank screen.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
this is a wonderful naani. the artwork very expressive for this poem and it's brilliant message. i love the color scheme of the background and fonts.
great job, six
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this is a wonderful naani. the artwork very expressive for this poem and it's brilliant message. i love the color scheme of the background and fonts.
great job, six
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from cherry_rose
In just 21 syllables I get the impression of an artist standing in front of a blank canvas contemplating what should be painted next.
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In just 21 syllables I get the impression of an artist standing in front of a blank canvas contemplating what should be painted next.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
Comment from davidray
I probably won't hear back from you, but I will say that I enjoyed this in all its simplicity. A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I probably won't hear back from you, but I will say that I enjoyed this in all its simplicity. A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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I always respond (well.....maybe I might miss a few by accident!). So glad you enjoyed this piece! Really appreciate your very kind review and comments. With regards, Sue
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Sorry, Sue. I was just being cheeky. Sometimes I forget to respond to them all too. :)
Comment from MJMuraco
This was a wonderful, yet simple four line poem. The artwork is perfect because it is so blank and staring back at you. It is kind of like a blank screen on my computer when I am trying to write something good but am experiencing writers block. LOL
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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This was a wonderful, yet simple four line poem. The artwork is perfect because it is so blank and staring back at you. It is kind of like a blank screen on my computer when I am trying to write something good but am experiencing writers block. LOL
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2008
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Oh yeah....that "block" hits us all! So glad you liked this piece. Thank you for your very generous review and kind comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from syndactl
In all its simplicity, this poem is brilliant, sixteezkid. It is so unique to look at a potential work of art from the point of view of the canvas. I commend you for showing a timeless story from a new perspective.
GREAT JOB!
-syndactl
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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In all its simplicity, this poem is brilliant, sixteezkid. It is so unique to look at a potential work of art from the point of view of the canvas. I commend you for showing a timeless story from a new perspective.
GREAT JOB!
-syndactl
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2008
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syndactl, I am so humbled by your most generous remarks on this work. I am very glad you like it and so appreciate this most encouraging review! Just makes me want to "keep on keeping on"!! Again, thank you!
Comment from Artasylum
i can really relate to this on several levels one being the blank canvas blossoming and the other a blank piece of paper...hopefully...good read..yours, diana
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i can really relate to this on several levels one being the blank canvas blossoming and the other a blank piece of paper...hopefully...good read..yours, diana
Comment Written 03-Dec-2008