Comment from
lyenochka
Good to see you back, Jesse! Yes, trust is critical in relationships or else, it cannot grow. I really like the use of internal rhyming as in "Trust is a must" and "Decide for pride to provide".
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
Comment from
Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent and authentic truth. People need to find the best companions in life whom they can trust. Only when you build trust can something truthful develope. I enjoyed your well planned and well written poem!
Your friend,
Alex
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025