Jars
Kyrielle sonnet54 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Compelling, well crafted piece. It was also thought provoking and very well executed. Thank you for sharing this on this platform. I expect that you will receive many complimentary comments. Good job!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
Compelling, well crafted piece. It was also thought provoking and very well executed. Thank you for sharing this on this platform. I expect that you will receive many complimentary comments. Good job!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thanks Brenda, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're Welcome!
Comment from BethShelby
I really enjoyed reading your Kyrielle with the reading line of the wolf that stalks at night. The fact that you also made it into a sonnet is a bonus. You should have entered it in the contest. I like the many scripture references to the wolf. The Bible mentions wolves frequently.
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
I really enjoyed reading your Kyrielle with the reading line of the wolf that stalks at night. The fact that you also made it into a sonnet is a bonus. You should have entered it in the contest. I like the many scripture references to the wolf. The Bible mentions wolves frequently.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thanks Beth, for these super, comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sally Law
Wow! I wish I had another six for you, dear poet. Outstanding! There are many to beware these days, even on FS! We must keep close to the Lord and His word to survive these times. God bless you and keep you, and shepherd your heart. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
Wow! I wish I had another six for you, dear poet. Outstanding! There are many to beware these days, even on FS! We must keep close to the Lord and His word to survive these times. God bless you and keep you, and shepherd your heart. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thanks Sally, for these beautiful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
You and the songs of Solomon have something in common. Both either sing about the Lord and His goodness or recite words of wisdom in such a way of interest, it quenches man's thirst.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
You and the songs of Solomon have something in common. Both either sing about the Lord and His goodness or recite words of wisdom in such a way of interest, it quenches man's thirst.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thanks Ben, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy