Comment from Senyai

Excellent

Hi Roy,

This is indeed a sweet tribute to your handsome grand child. He has such a fair face and beautiful smile. A beautiful poem to guide this young boy as he lives his life, having God watching him grow into a man. Lovely effortless rhyme only you, Roy Owen can do. Such an earnest prayer to be with Miah always.

Have a blessed Sunday,
Senyai



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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Thanks so much Senyai, for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this this birthday tribute for Miah. He may not now, being 9 years old, but he will come to treasure this birthday poem from his grandpa. I know he will. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2021

Thanks so much Barbara for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy