Leaves Curling
An equinox spins Fall closer more.41 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent lantern poem for the contest
that reads smoothly and has the correct syllables.
Nice description of the change in seasons
and good choice of art work.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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You've written an excellent lantern poem for the contest
that reads smoothly and has the correct syllables.
Nice description of the change in seasons
and good choice of art work.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2020
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Robert, i do appreciate your review and comments have safe Labor Day weekend.
