My Undying Devotion!
Praising God for The Gift of Her!61 total reviews
Comment from djeckert
Nicely done love poem. I thought for a second that you were referenci f the Biblical Godly woman known as " Wisdom "in the likes of the Proverbs and Psalms, but I see it's your girlfriend. Congrats on finding such a pearl on this earth and hang on to her. Blessings
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Nicely done love poem. I thought for a second that you were referenci f the Biblical Godly woman known as " Wisdom "in the likes of the Proverbs and Psalms, but I see it's your girlfriend. Congrats on finding such a pearl on this earth and hang on to her. Blessings
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
Lovely tribute to your girlfriend! She is very lucky to have such a devoted fan, and your Godly outlook is refreshing and comes through very clearly in this poem. The only suggestion I would make is to make the words lowercase rather than capitalized because that makes it harder to ready easily.
But great job!!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Lovely tribute to your girlfriend! She is very lucky to have such a devoted fan, and your Godly outlook is refreshing and comes through very clearly in this poem. The only suggestion I would make is to make the words lowercase rather than capitalized because that makes it harder to ready easily.
But great job!!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Fonda Little,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhythm and rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting heartfelt love towards the girlfriend and faith plus unflinching devotion to the Almighty.
Style and Presentation are particularly noteworthy.
BEST of LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hello Fonda Little,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhythm and rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting heartfelt love towards the girlfriend and faith plus unflinching devotion to the Almighty.
Style and Presentation are particularly noteworthy.
BEST of LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
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Fonda Little, Most Welcome!
Take care. With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
If we wait, and listen to our hearts, God will tell us when the right person is standing before us. Your poem is so sweet, and I'm sure your young lady will be thrilled to receive it. Your love shines through every line for God and for her. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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If we wait, and listen to our hearts, God will tell us when the right person is standing before us. Your poem is so sweet, and I'm sure your young lady will be thrilled to receive it. Your love shines through every line for God and for her. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem about God's plans for our lives are mostly unknown to us until we see His hand in our lives daily and how we work everything in our favour when it is good for us.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about God's plans for our lives are mostly unknown to us until we see His hand in our lives daily and how we work everything in our favour when it is good for us.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I love the end rhyme of fruition and mission. I think this is a great tribute poem to one significant other. I also was thinking there are some inversions going on which I stumbled a little over, such as: 'tries to in our path throw.' That is often a device that can be modified, though. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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I love the end rhyme of fruition and mission. I think this is a great tribute poem to one significant other. I also was thinking there are some inversions going on which I stumbled a little over, such as: 'tries to in our path throw.' That is often a device that can be modified, though. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your 15 month Anniversary, these are sweet innocent words and I wish you well, an uplifting poem to delight us this morning, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Congratulations on your 15 month Anniversary, these are sweet innocent words and I wish you well, an uplifting poem to delight us this morning, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Beautiful, godly love poem, Fonda! I am so happy for you, that you have found a stunning and God-fearing woman to share your life, dreams and mission with. It is good to be romantically in love with someone who shares your deep love for Jesus Christ, and the things of God.
Your rhymes are excellent, and your choice of words reflect both your profound gratitude to God for putting the two of you together, and your devotion to her as the very special woman you have chosen.
If you don't mind a suggestion, I don't think you need to capitalize so many words. I know you're doing it for emphasis, but in my humble opinion, it's good to let the meaning of your words stand on their own. To capitalize too many words can actually be distracting. Only words referring to God Himself (Lord, God, He, Him) need to be capitalized. Even the word "godly" is simply an adjective and doesn't require it, and "the" does not, either.
If you really want to capitalize a few words for emphasis, like Gift, Bond and Mission, they will stand out more, if they are not surrounded by a long string of other capitalized words.
One other suggestion, for re-wording one line, for an improvement in the flow:
tries to in our path throw,
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tries in our path to throw,
Your image is brilliant and adds to the feeling of glory, so beautifully expressed in your poem. Thank you for sharing this wonderful development with us!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Beautiful, godly love poem, Fonda! I am so happy for you, that you have found a stunning and God-fearing woman to share your life, dreams and mission with. It is good to be romantically in love with someone who shares your deep love for Jesus Christ, and the things of God.
Your rhymes are excellent, and your choice of words reflect both your profound gratitude to God for putting the two of you together, and your devotion to her as the very special woman you have chosen.
If you don't mind a suggestion, I don't think you need to capitalize so many words. I know you're doing it for emphasis, but in my humble opinion, it's good to let the meaning of your words stand on their own. To capitalize too many words can actually be distracting. Only words referring to God Himself (Lord, God, He, Him) need to be capitalized. Even the word "godly" is simply an adjective and doesn't require it, and "the" does not, either.
If you really want to capitalize a few words for emphasis, like Gift, Bond and Mission, they will stand out more, if they are not surrounded by a long string of other capitalized words.
One other suggestion, for re-wording one line, for an improvement in the flow:
tries to in our path throw,
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tries in our path to throw,
Your image is brilliant and adds to the feeling of glory, so beautifully expressed in your poem. Thank you for sharing this wonderful development with us!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
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You're very welcome, Fonda. Thank you for the blessing, and may God bless you both abundantly! - Mary Kay
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a joy when you are blessed with such a special person. I like how you protect your relationship with faith in Lord:' Thank Him So Constantly,
That The Lord So Graciously,
Brought Her to Me,
and no matter what the devil,
tries to in our path throw,
he already,
so sadly knows,
that none of such things,
shall come to fruition," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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What a joy when you are blessed with such a special person. I like how you protect your relationship with faith in Lord:' Thank Him So Constantly,
That The Lord So Graciously,
Brought Her to Me,
and no matter what the devil,
tries to in our path throw,
he already,
so sadly knows,
that none of such things,
shall come to fruition," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from Mary Furlong
The heartfelt sincerity of your poem shines through, giving it a special rhythm of its very own. Keep writing. You have a lot to offer. Best wishes to the two of you and God bless.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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The heartfelt sincerity of your poem shines through, giving it a special rhythm of its very own. Keep writing. You have a lot to offer. Best wishes to the two of you and God bless.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!