An End to Hate!
They were never your enemy, just waiting to be your friend!55 total reviews
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
Such an appropriate message for these trying times. The photo is priceless and helps to bring this poem to life. The rhyming is pure not at all forced. I think this is a solid entry for the contest best of luck in that.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Such an appropriate message for these trying times. The photo is priceless and helps to bring this poem to life. The rhyming is pure not at all forced. I think this is a solid entry for the contest best of luck in that.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Sally Law
A much needed poem and clarion call for prayer and change. First, rid hatred in the heart. Thats the only way to achieve victory and attain peace of any kind. First within, then, without. Jesus is the Prince of Peace.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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A much needed poem and clarion call for prayer and change. First, rid hatred in the heart. Thats the only way to achieve victory and attain peace of any kind. First within, then, without. Jesus is the Prince of Peace.
Sending you my best today as always, and blessings in Christ,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
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You're welcome, Fonda. Blessings in Christ, Sal xo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is what loving God is, loving our neighbors no matter what colour or race. We are all His children and we are taught to lovely our brothers and sisters. Well done, this is an excellent poem for the contest. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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That is what loving God is, loving our neighbors no matter what colour or race. We are all His children and we are taught to lovely our brothers and sisters. Well done, this is an excellent poem for the contest. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from lancellot
This is a very interesting take. And yes the Bible is a tale of two different Points of View. You can tell it is written by different authors, because in the beginning books, there was some killing of those you hated, even by God himself. Then Jesus came, and new writers came too. It is nice to wish life can be all about love, but isn't that denying what we know humanity is really about?
Thought provoking work. Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is a very interesting take. And yes the Bible is a tale of two different Points of View. You can tell it is written by different authors, because in the beginning books, there was some killing of those you hated, even by God himself. Then Jesus came, and new writers came too. It is nice to wish life can be all about love, but isn't that denying what we know humanity is really about?
Thought provoking work. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is what I like to read as the best poetry! Thanks for sharing your notes that you went to God for inspiration and then wrote as he led. It is very much appreciated! Bill
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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This is what I like to read as the best poetry! Thanks for sharing your notes that you went to God for inspiration and then wrote as he led. It is very much appreciated! Bill
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi there
This is a lovely poem for the current times. Well done nailing the rhymes neatly and I wish you all the very best in the contest. Should do well! R
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Hi there
This is a lovely poem for the current times. Well done nailing the rhymes neatly and I wish you all the very best in the contest. Should do well! R
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from sherrygreywolf
A beautiful commentary on the love of Jesus and why hate is detrimental to those who succumb to its trap. I especially was taken by the lines "That person you hate, Jesus died for them too." Nicely done, my friend!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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A beautiful commentary on the love of Jesus and why hate is detrimental to those who succumb to its trap. I especially was taken by the lines "That person you hate, Jesus died for them too." Nicely done, my friend!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Very good work here;-) I do however, need to mention first that there are way to many commas that are placed after each line of this well thought out poem! This needs attention right away;-)
It rhymes until the very last two lines. ("just awaiting the day,
that they could be your friend!") You may think about tweaking that!
Overall poem is OUTSTANDING and it flows perfectly in sync with the words and the beat;-)
It depicts our Father in glorious form and is truth as far as it biblically goes!
Thank you for sharing this amazing poem and many blessings to you;-)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Very good work here;-) I do however, need to mention first that there are way to many commas that are placed after each line of this well thought out poem! This needs attention right away;-)
It rhymes until the very last two lines. ("just awaiting the day,
that they could be your friend!") You may think about tweaking that!
Overall poem is OUTSTANDING and it flows perfectly in sync with the words and the beat;-)
It depicts our Father in glorious form and is truth as far as it biblically goes!
Thank you for sharing this amazing poem and many blessings to you;-)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
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Comment from humpwhistle
I'm approaching six months sober myself. I know how much this can change one's perspective. I don't know know if you're doing the steps, but you certainly have a higher power. Rely on it.
Best of luck in the competition . . . and in life.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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I'm approaching six months sober myself. I know how much this can change one's perspective. I don't know know if you're doing the steps, but you certainly have a higher power. Rely on it.
Best of luck in the competition . . . and in life.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The riots seem to be less about race and more about opportunists wanting to loot shops and cause trouble. Many jump on the band wagon when there is a riot and join the crowd without thinking of the reason why. Your write is filled with a plea for change and for people to join hands and celebrate each other's differences, much enjoyed Fonda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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The riots seem to be less about race and more about opportunists wanting to loot shops and cause trouble. Many jump on the band wagon when there is a riot and join the crowd without thinking of the reason why. Your write is filled with a plea for change and for people to join hands and celebrate each other's differences, much enjoyed Fonda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2020
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Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!