If Only I Could. . .
An Angel of God!48 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt free verse tribute to the live of your life that awaits you in heaven and you will do anything possible to let her know you love her and will do anything to join her in heaven one day.
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A very well-written heartfelt free verse tribute to the live of your life that awaits you in heaven and you will do anything possible to let her know you love her and will do anything to join her in heaven one day.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Sandra! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully, Bill (Commando).
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Accepting changes is the hardest thing to do in life and as you say we cannot hold on to those we love as either one of us departs this earth eventually. Your words are whimsical and fanciful and filled with loving words that are very touching, a fine free-verse with some internal rhyming, much enjoyed Bill, love Dolly x
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Accepting changes is the hardest thing to do in life and as you say we cannot hold on to those we love as either one of us departs this earth eventually. Your words are whimsical and fanciful and filled with loving words that are very touching, a fine free-verse with some internal rhyming, much enjoyed Bill, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Dolly! Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill (Commando).
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is AWESOME, Commando. The beautiful FanArt sets the tone for what is to follow. Readers are treated to a free verse with many techniques of its writing evident with in the beautiful love poem you have written. The internal rhyming is super. It adds to the enjoyment of your poem along with great use of alliteration. The fine examples of what you wish to do for your Angel~your wife~are vividly expressed with great imagery. I love astronomy; so, I was immediately drawn into your well-chosen words with the line "if I could, I would catch shooting stars from the heavens in jars . . . . " That is a beautiful message. But, stopping the world from spinning to enjoy one more moment of a beautiful sunset is another fantastic image. Your author notes read like a poem, too. Thank you for sharing this awesome, personal reflection for your Angel. I enjoyed reading your heart-felt words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan.
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Your poem is AWESOME, Commando. The beautiful FanArt sets the tone for what is to follow. Readers are treated to a free verse with many techniques of its writing evident with in the beautiful love poem you have written. The internal rhyming is super. It adds to the enjoyment of your poem along with great use of alliteration. The fine examples of what you wish to do for your Angel~your wife~are vividly expressed with great imagery. I love astronomy; so, I was immediately drawn into your well-chosen words with the line "if I could, I would catch shooting stars from the heavens in jars . . . . " That is a beautiful message. But, stopping the world from spinning to enjoy one more moment of a beautiful sunset is another fantastic image. Your author notes read like a poem, too. Thank you for sharing this awesome, personal reflection for your Angel. I enjoyed reading your heart-felt words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2020
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Your EXCEPTIONAL review is AWESOME as well, Laura Jan...a "SALUTE!" Thanks for the kind words and taking the time to read my work. All of which is an honor. It is magnificent having an "AWESOME WRITER" such as yourself to express admiration for my work. As always, best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Bill
Comment from Carl DeVere
Sweet Valentine to a loving wife. More husbands should be this good. I liked the rhyme and rhythm. I usually don't read much love poetry but this is a standout. Good imagination too. You don't see many poems with references to cartographers...loved it!
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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Sweet Valentine to a loving wife. More husbands should be this good. I liked the rhyme and rhythm. I usually don't read much love poetry but this is a standout. Good imagination too. You don't see many poems with references to cartographers...loved it!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Carl! It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill (Commando).
Comment from Tina Crute
This is personal and beautiful, despite all the rules, lol! This is a lovely tribute to your angel wife, so thanks for sharing it with us.The world needs more love.
Tina
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This is personal and beautiful, despite all the rules, lol! This is a lovely tribute to your angel wife, so thanks for sharing it with us.The world needs more love.
Tina
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2020
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A "SALUTE," Tina! It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the review/support. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Bill (Commando)
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Same to you, Bill! Hope
you and your lovebirds have
A blessed weekend!
Tina
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
What a wonderful tribute. I especially like the line: For a day I'd make the world stop spinning--as in the beginning, so you could watch
the beautiful sunset for one moment longer ... - a gift beyond compare. Great job. - Lobber
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello,
What a wonderful tribute. I especially like the line: For a day I'd make the world stop spinning--as in the beginning, so you could watch
the beautiful sunset for one moment longer ... - a gift beyond compare. Great job. - Lobber
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Hello, Lobber...a "Salute!" It is an honor meeting you. Best wishes and God Bless. Bill
Comment from J.T. Blossom
Love is a holding on and a letting go. The first feeds the ego, the latter feeds our connection to this amazing universe we are privileged to be a part of. Your poem is a beautiful tribute to love and the many lessons it teaches us about beauty and the human condition.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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Love is a holding on and a letting go. The first feeds the ego, the latter feeds our connection to this amazing universe we are privileged to be a part of. Your poem is a beautiful tribute to love and the many lessons it teaches us about beauty and the human condition.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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A "Salute," J.T.! Thanks for reading. Bill
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I am positive that even if a love leaves, you will always hold part of that love in your heart forever. I wish you the best of luck.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I am positive that even if a love leaves, you will always hold part of that love in your heart forever. I wish you the best of luck.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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A "Salute!" Thanks, Barb for reading my work. Bill