Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Another Decade"Musings of an old man -2020
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello unknown author of I Turn the calendar, buckled in, and enjoyed your 3-5-3
Another Decade. I'm getting ready to Turn the page, of 8 decade that has passed and waiting for another decade to enjoy
Best to you in the contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Hello unknown author of I Turn the calendar, buckled in, and enjoyed your 3-5-3
Another Decade. I'm getting ready to Turn the page, of 8 decade that has passed and waiting for another decade to enjoy
Best to you in the contest.
Gert
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Gert, thank you, We will do a virtual high-five at the end of this one!
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You are welcome unknown author
Gert
Comment from Ogden
This is a terrific entry, and probably the onr yo beat. So now I'll collect my 1.04 member dollars, and reserve a spot to help finance my entry fee. :o)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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This is a terrific entry, and probably the onr yo beat. So now I'll collect my 1.04 member dollars, and reserve a spot to help finance my entry fee. :o)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019
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Don, I will take that and gladly send the virtual back notes
Comment from rhonnie69
MERRY CHRISTMAS POET: I like this posting in that although it is brief, it is clear and to the point. Time waits for no one. God gives us, His people, 24 hours a day.
He gave us all every minute of the passed decade. YES. Let us turn the page. Let us start a new in the name of, Jesus Christ. Through Him...for us...the best is yet to come. We are living on the promises of our God. Therefore we can all have favorable expectations. God bless you, poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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MERRY CHRISTMAS POET: I like this posting in that although it is brief, it is clear and to the point. Time waits for no one. God gives us, His people, 24 hours a day.
He gave us all every minute of the passed decade. YES. Let us turn the page. Let us start a new in the name of, Jesus Christ. Through Him...for us...the best is yet to come. We are living on the promises of our God. Therefore we can all have favorable expectations. God bless you, poet. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I delight in your review comments and celebrations of Gods gift to us! Merry Christmas🙏
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It just flew! It seems like only yesterday when it was 2010. You get busy and before you know it your much older and you haven't achieved what you set out to do. But then on reflection, if you are loved and loving, what does it matter. Thanks for reminding us of the fleeting moments we need to use.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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It just flew! It seems like only yesterday when it was 2010. You get busy and before you know it your much older and you haven't achieved what you set out to do. But then on reflection, if you are loved and loving, what does it matter. Thanks for reminding us of the fleeting moments we need to use.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Time is so non-linear at times! We have fleeting moments of pause and we seem to suddenly be on a human conveyer belt running at high speed. I?m going to end the next ten and the sand in my hour glass continues to become exhausted....
Comment from Therese Caron
What a wonderful 353 poem! Every new year feels like a promise to something different, better, and happier. And now a new decade! This little poem is so simple and basic and yet says so much. Start anew!I think this is written so well for this time of year, and the calendar page is a perfect illustration of what is to come. Very good poem. We will see what 2020 brings, I hope all good things for our country. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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What a wonderful 353 poem! Every new year feels like a promise to something different, better, and happier. And now a new decade! This little poem is so simple and basic and yet says so much. Start anew!I think this is written so well for this time of year, and the calendar page is a perfect illustration of what is to come. Very good poem. We will see what 2020 brings, I hope all good things for our country. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks a ton! 2020 here we come!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the message conveyed in it. You're absolutely right. We can begin again. I enjoyed reading this well thought out and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I like this and the message conveyed in it. You're absolutely right. We can begin again. I enjoyed reading this well thought out and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I love do overs another 10 years to get it right! Wow see you at the end of it!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! There's been a 'debate' on social media whether the decade starts in '20 or '21 (because folks have nothing better to do, don't cha know?!)... either way, this is a great offering for the contest! ;) Good luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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LOL!! There's been a 'debate' on social media whether the decade starts in '20 or '21 (because folks have nothing better to do, don't cha know?!)... either way, this is a great offering for the contest! ;) Good luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Hi Yvette, as if we did have enough on social media already...Based on prior history the Decade begins 2011 and really ends 2020, but I prefer the rounding- Since i was born in 50 I learned to tens count easier LOL
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Hi Yvette, as if we did have enough on social media already...Based on prior history the Decade begins 2011 and really ends 2020, but I prefer the rounding- Since i was born in 50 I learned to tens count easier LOL
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Hello fellow poet, hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Thanks my good friend, and Yuletide cheers back at you!
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon Writer
This is very good and I think you expressed yourself well in a very small form, which is always difficult.
I doubt if I will be the only one to comment, but I think that the next decade begins at the end of 2020 (so its 1991-2000 / 2001 - 2010 / 2011 - 2020 etc). This is a petty point and should not be seen as a criticism of your work in this form.
I wish you well with this and your continued writing.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Hello Anon Writer
This is very good and I think you expressed yourself well in a very small form, which is always difficult.
I doubt if I will be the only one to comment, but I think that the next decade begins at the end of 2020 (so its 1991-2000 / 2001 - 2010 / 2011 - 2020 etc). This is a petty point and should not be seen as a criticism of your work in this form.
I wish you well with this and your continued writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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Yeah I was playing around a bit probably to far, but thanks for ypoour kind words.
Comment from Darlene Franklin
I hadn't thought of that. Next year being a new decade. A fresh start, and at 65, that sounds good! What will ten years bring? Heaven, for me? Or more life on this earth? See you in 10 years (wink) Darlene
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I hadn't thought of that. Next year being a new decade. A fresh start, and at 65, that sounds good! What will ten years bring? Heaven, for me? Or more life on this earth? See you in 10 years (wink) Darlene
Comment Written 18-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2019
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I will be there!
