Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

I will look forward to reading the continuation of this. Certainly it started well, with interesting scene-setting information about Kirstin and her life stye.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019

My new friend. How are you, Katherine? It?s so good to see you. Thank you for the excellent review and kind comments.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo

Comment from damommy

Excellent

This sounds like a true love story where the letter writer is someone close who's never declared his feeling before. I can't wait to find out who he is, and what Kristin thinks of him.

-Kristin was [part of or one of] a team of eight

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 Comment Written 24-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019

Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind critique. I have repaired it and it reads more smoothly. Thank you, again.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo