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The Buried Coffee Can

Hiding his money.

44 total reviews 
Comment from MissMerri
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A wonderful and well-told story. I was glad the selfish children didn't find his hidden money. I hope, though, you will some day write a sequel telling us who did find the hidden coffee can and what they were able to accomplish because of it. Nicely told tale and great entry for this contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2021

Comment from rockmann
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Very well written. I can relate, having lost my wife a few years back. Your poem flowed wonderfully and kept me intrigued throughout. And it is fitting that the coffee can was never found. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    Thank you for your comments and five stars.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a fun write about this old man who buried his money in a coffee can. It's amazing where all the relatives come from when there is a death as they are in the hope of inheriting money, I've seen it first hand, I enjoyed your story and rhymes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
    Thank you Dolly, glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Sugarray77
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I enjoyed reading this rhythmic verse. Great story in a poem that flows smoothly and succinctly through the tale in a logical way. Great linear presentation helps it move along at a good clip. Well done on this poem.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
    Thank you Melissa for your review, kind words and five stars.