Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Have a Good Day"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your monorhymed verses. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your lines flow smoothly. However, it is you message that comes through loud and clear. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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You did a great job with your monorhymed verses. I enjoyed reading your poem. Your lines flow smoothly. However, it is you message that comes through loud and clear. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate your comments about my poems, they are great.
Comment from karenina
Good meditative thoughts to begin any morning with! Your third line "forget not to pray" kind of threw me as the wording could be interpreted as a sort of double negative... Not quite the same as "do not forget to pray"--for example. My only suggestion would be to change it (for clarity) to something like "remember to pray" or :take time to pray"--but really, once I read through your poem it was clear what your intention was. Good thoughts shine like the sun!--Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Good meditative thoughts to begin any morning with! Your third line "forget not to pray" kind of threw me as the wording could be interpreted as a sort of double negative... Not quite the same as "do not forget to pray"--for example. My only suggestion would be to change it (for clarity) to something like "remember to pray" or :take time to pray"--but really, once I read through your poem it was clear what your intention was. Good thoughts shine like the sun!--Karenina
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your delightful and informative review. Your comments are very good and helpful.
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Oh, sometimes I do ramble on don't I? I mean well! (smile)--Karenina
Comment from LisaMay
You have written a very good encouragement to begin the day with positivity and our hearts and minds well adjusted through the balance of prayer and wanting to do our best.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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You have written a very good encouragement to begin the day with positivity and our hearts and minds well adjusted through the balance of prayer and wanting to do our best.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Your positive comments are very good and helpful. I really appreciate them.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A perfect way to start the day.... and with your short, no-nonsense rhymes, this would make a great print out to put on one's refrigerator door or dressing mirror just to keep the words present as a reminder! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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A perfect way to start the day.... and with your short, no-nonsense rhymes, this would make a great print out to put on one's refrigerator door or dressing mirror just to keep the words present as a reminder! ;) ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for your review and your suggestion. It's a good idea and I would like to try it. With kindness,
GB
Comment from Lance S. Loria
A reverse alliteration of rhyming. Chuckle. A good message of prayer. I enjoyed the read. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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A reverse alliteration of rhyming. Chuckle. A good message of prayer. I enjoyed the read. No edits or adjustments necessary from me.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2019
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Thanks for your review and I'm glad you liked it and you found my write helpful. With kindness,
GB
