Crowd Goes Wild
Tyburn poem46 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written tyburn meets the challenging standards for this concise
form. It is enthusiastic and well expresses the excitement aroused by such
a sporting event.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Your well-written tyburn meets the challenging standards for this concise
form. It is enthusiastic and well expresses the excitement aroused by such
a sporting event.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review, Janice. I appreciate your encouraging response, and so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Jennifer Carr
Was unfamiliar with Tyburn poetry until now. Super fun and flowed nicely! The title is spot on with the poem and the graphic is awesome. Excellent work! :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Was unfamiliar with Tyburn poetry until now. Super fun and flowed nicely! The title is spot on with the poem and the graphic is awesome. Excellent work! :-)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you, Jennifer, for your review and kind comments for my poem. I appreciate your response, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Great use of baseball terminology in this Tyburn poetry verse.
Like especially:
rookie's switching pitching
wild fans
can't suggest a word for your 'vile' but it is one I would change: for me, it didn't fit even with your 'bitching' - yes I do recognize your style-vile rhyme, but ...
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Great use of baseball terminology in this Tyburn poetry verse.
Like especially:
rookie's switching pitching
wild fans
can't suggest a word for your 'vile' but it is one I would change: for me, it didn't fit even with your 'bitching' - yes I do recognize your style-vile rhyme, but ...
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your review and comments for my Tuburn poem, Mark. I always appreciate suggestions and seriously considerate them. Thank you.
Comment from Graybærd
A very different type of poem. Looks pretty difficult to put together in a sensible fashion and you did a great job with that.
Best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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A very different type of poem. Looks pretty difficult to put together in a sensible fashion and you did a great job with that.
Best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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I appreciate your kind review and comments for my poem, Greybaerd. Thank you for selecting it to read and for your kind wishes for the contest.
Comment from Earl Corp
It doesnt bother me but the word "bitching" might be worth a language warning. I do like the poem's rhyming patterns. The artwork is cool also. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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It doesnt bother me but the word "bitching" might be worth a language warning. I do like the poem's rhyming patterns. The artwork is cool also. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Thank you for your kind review and comments for my poem, Earl. I appreciate reader's suggestions and will always consider them. Thanks
Comment from meeshu
the fabulous thing about this poem is it reminds me Opening Day is only two and half months away! And the crowd goes wild...............Play Ball!..
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the fabulous thing about this poem is it reminds me Opening Day is only two and half months away! And the crowd goes wild...............Play Ball!..
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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I agree with you, meeshu, and in just a few weeks pitchers will report to spring training. Thank you for your great review and I appreciate your response.
