Starry Skies
Sonnet76 total reviews
Comment from ameen786
Glad it's not autobiographical; lovely sonnet in down to earth vocabulary reflecting a sad and beautiful story of love in excellent rhymes. Thanks for sharing and good luck!
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Glad it's not autobiographical; lovely sonnet in down to earth vocabulary reflecting a sad and beautiful story of love in excellent rhymes. Thanks for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you ameen for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a plaintive write of love won and lost - easy and fluid rhyme, with just a couple of uneven spots, easily corrected by reading aloud several times, to retain the sing/song effect of rhyming poetry...
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In my opinion, a plaintive write of love won and lost - easy and fluid rhyme, with just a couple of uneven spots, easily corrected by reading aloud several times, to retain the sing/song effect of rhyming poetry...
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet - a gem of a write...Eve
Comment from estory
The language here is very contemporary and honest and natural, and I think its refreshing and up to date. The framework is correct, the meter is soft and a bit sad, and the rhymes kind of echo like footsteps in empty rooms. I like this image of the wintery day, the snowflakes falling, that seem to symbolize the feeling of lost love, of a love gone cold. estory
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The language here is very contemporary and honest and natural, and I think its refreshing and up to date. The framework is correct, the meter is soft and a bit sad, and the rhymes kind of echo like footsteps in empty rooms. I like this image of the wintery day, the snowflakes falling, that seem to symbolize the feeling of lost love, of a love gone cold. estory
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a poem of mourning a marriage that has broken, it seems through divorce. It is sad because this person definitely still loves and misses her spouse. It could also be mourning a dead spouse.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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This is a poem of mourning a marriage that has broken, it seems through divorce. It is sad because this person definitely still loves and misses her spouse. It could also be mourning a dead spouse.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you dragonpoet for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
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You are so very welcome, Janet
Joan
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You are so very welcome, Janet
Joan
Comment from Benny Beeharry
This is a very sweet write. Although so full of pain and wistfulness. Still this is a human story. In fact how many in this world when the night come have to go to the wedding bed alone. Heartbreak, is not it. A big sigh!
Danny Jock
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This is a very sweet write. Although so full of pain and wistfulness. Still this is a human story. In fact how many in this world when the night come have to go to the wedding bed alone. Heartbreak, is not it. A big sigh!
Danny Jock
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Danny for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from afraazsidhu
Hi
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem for its unhindered flow, beautiful weave of the words and lovely interplay of the time. A great masterful work. Congratulations.
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Hi
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem for its unhindered flow, beautiful weave of the words and lovely interplay of the time. A great masterful work. Congratulations.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is such a lovely sonnet, my friend. The snowflakes are sure filling the air now, lol, Have a great New Year! ~Kerry
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This is such a lovely sonnet, my friend. The snowflakes are sure filling the air now, lol, Have a great New Year! ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Kerry for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
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You're very welcome. Janet.
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this poem. To be honest , I love the title, and the poem flows well from there. The imagery is beautiful. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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I enjoyed this poem. To be honest , I love the title, and the poem flows well from there. The imagery is beautiful. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Oliver for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Starry Skies", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. The description is deftly executed. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Starry Skies", is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. The description is deftly executed. It was a pleasure to both read and review a work of this standard. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you Duchess for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, blessings to you too.
You certainly deserved the encouraging review,
the Duchess
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely metered poem in sonnet form! Thanks for sharing. I love that you let your muse direct how the poem should go and what story it would tell. It's realistic that someone mourning a lost love could feel exactly this way.
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A lovely metered poem in sonnet form! Thanks for sharing. I love that you let your muse direct how the poem should go and what story it would tell. It's realistic that someone mourning a lost love could feel exactly this way.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
