This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Joe Is Home"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra. It would seem Veronica is in for a surprise every time she travels back in time. I love the visual of Veronica expecting to kiss her son, and finding out it was a grown man. His response was great too. Yes, I can imagine having your bum wiped when you were in your early thirties would be a bit embarrassing!
So looking forward to finding out what hapens next - well done!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
Another great chapter, Sandra. It would seem Veronica is in for a surprise every time she travels back in time. I love the visual of Veronica expecting to kiss her son, and finding out it was a grown man. His response was great too. Yes, I can imagine having your bum wiped when you were in your early thirties would be a bit embarrassing!
So looking forward to finding out what hapens next - well done!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much, dear Alexis, for another of your lovely reviews and all those shiny stars!! Big hugs my friend. :) xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH I have been waiting impatiently for this chapter. I am so glad things are moving forward. Can the wife see her?
Now for more questions and I feel they will be surprising
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
OH I have been waiting impatiently for this chapter. I am so glad things are moving forward. Can the wife see her?
Now for more questions and I feel they will be surprising
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much, Barb, you are lovely! I had to split this part into two, it just went on so much, nearly 2000 words! I thought no one would read that length!! LOL. Anyway, I can post the 'questions' that will be asked in a few days. Thanks again, my friend. xxxx Sandra
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You are so right, I have been following one story and this last one was over 3000 words, I lost the story line half way through